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Worst breakfast ever

Poem, I thought is just play of words and syllable As breakfast of juice and toast laid out on table Was fiancee's maiden breakfast, joined in dress with lapel Napkin laid on my lap as table manner To capture slip of drop or missed bite that may scatter Drop did fall but the breeze from fan tossed it farther Spoiled dress of my fiancée, upset with quizzical stare Sorry did I say Gave my virgin napkin to wipe stain away Fuming, she threw her napkin at me that on her lap lay Her spoiled napkin stained my dress by the way Cursed Self less, more stupid fan Rotating blades, cutting air, throwing breeze without aim But tossed the drop dot on fiancée, oblivious of decency or shame Switched off fan in fury, but angered everyone all the more All loathed me for silly manners I swore never to have breakfast on table with others Since then, squat on floor, switch off fan even of next chamber Avoid napkin, even to wipe hands, after breakfast is over --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- © Hitendra Mehta Entry for Members Contest – My Worst Poem Ever by (Destroyer ((Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/26/2011 9:42:00 AM
this is adorable...forget about them, just use your napkin whenever you feel like it! Thanks for reading my work Julie
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:15:00 PM
I SAW THE TITLE AND HAD TO READ IT, CONGRATULATIONS, LOVED IT, ~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest.Sara
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win here, Hitendra-- very interesting breakfast -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:43:00 PM
Many congratulations on this well deserved win Hitendra. I love the comparision with B'fast.
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:57:00 PM
A unique way to take this challenge, Hitendra, comparing the play of words in bad poetry to a breakfast in which things go awry! Congrats on your win! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hitendra
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:10:00 PM
Super congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in P.D.'s worst poem ever written contest.. though all your poetry is quite brilliant my friend.. enjoy another victory today with much luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:11:00 AM
Hitendra, congratulations on your success in Pd's contest ;) blessings Wilma
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:27:00 AM
Mehta, Congratulations, Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 11/19/2010 5:11:00 PM
But this is a wonderful poem Hitendra... the story is the worst kind of thing to happen to someone trying to impress a certain special one ..but the poem's essence is great.. good luck my friend in this contest.. am sure P.D. will enjoy this read.. happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/19/2010 3:54:00 PM
Good luck in the contest ...Sara
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:12:00 PM
Very funny, witty and humorous write on the worst breakfast, Hitendra. good luck
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:31:00 PM
lol creative write you have here..much enjoyed...Michael
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