Premiere Contest WinnerWorshipping In Nature's Sanctuary

Johnny-Jump-Ups nestle into the forest floor mosses, Along with dainty Jack-in-the-Pulpits hiding beneath The larger fronds of swampy ferns soaking up moisture From the dew-laden flowering branches of laurel Where I find myself dreaming in the verdant woodland, Edging the meadow beyond the cluttered beaver stand. A canopy of vine-entangled branches, a vault-like nave, Provides a sanctuary of sacred candles dimmed for mass A pew-less haven for wounded souls, and tiny chipmunks, Who scurry to find isolated spots for quiet meditation While grebes and gallinules make up the choir ensemble; A purple swamphen takes up the guttural baritone line. The late morning is mine, sitting along the narrow trail In a cross-legged yoga pose with arms across my knees, Soaking up the faint sweet smells of sassafras and pine And slipping into what I sometimes call my “blue funk” Where nothing on earth matters outside this quiet shelter, Dozing softly, I dream of a utopian sweet, elusive peace.
FIRST PLACE WINNER (TROPHY) June 25, 2022 Submitted to: "Poetry Marathon Mile 5" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney Written on June 3, 2021 Selected for FEATURED POEM On the front page of All Poetry, September 13, 2021 GOLD MEDAL WINNER "5 Golds or Less - Profanisaurus" Poetry Contest All Poetry, December 11, 2021 Appeared in "It's Still Poetry" Poetry Soup Anthology - 2021 CreateSpace, Amazon publication
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Alex Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Wow! Getting ahead! Wish you all the best and Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much, Chris. I appreciate your best wishes!
Logan Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Milt! I'm so very happy that you're on the track in the Marathon. Nature poems always make me smile! ;)
Hankins Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna. I also noted that you are in Second Place in the Marathon! Fantastic. I'm so proud of you. I'll keep running and maybe I'll catch up! (chuckling)
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:21 AM
wow, this one has tons of good credits to it. WELL DONE on your trophy win, Milt. Amazing description of nature.
Hankins Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. This has long been one of my favorite poems. I am so grateful that it finally got a trophy win. I don't want to toot my own horn, but I've always thought it was deserving of one. I always appreciate hearing from you, Andrea.
Kyser Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Congrats on your win! Been struggling to find the right entires for this one,..
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 8:13 PM
It's a challenge, to be sure. This was my first placing. Good luck to you. You'll make some winning submissions, I am sure. Don't give up. See you at the finish line.
Ashley Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 6:12 PM
Oh so beautiful, Milt. Your amazing imagery brings me to the center of "this quiet shelter". Serene yet vibrant.. exquisite poetry, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM
Susan, thank you so much. I cannot tell you what your affirmative comments mean to me. I am grateful that this poem is resonating with so many people. And, of course, I was thrilled to find it now a Trophy winner, which further validates its meaning to readers. Warmest wishes to you, as well, Susan.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 2:18 PM
Wow. Congratulations. Such a lovely piece. I so enjoyed it. I love love love the woods. God bless you. Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Thanks so much, Gina. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Blessings to you, too.
Toney Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 1:26 PM
This is a Fave for me too, Milton. Your "Nature's Sanctuary" sounds so idyllic, and your descriptive language is brilliant. All I need are the GPS coordinates and I'll be right there with you! Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently tied for 8th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Thank you so much, again, Mark. I am really enjoying the Marathon contest as I feel everyone else is. See you at the finish!
Watt Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Milt, I remember this gem from the anthology and was so pleased to read it again and see it win a trophy today. I love the sanctuary imagery of your beautiful and tranquil haven. A fave for me. Congratulations and blessings ~ John
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Thanks, John, so much. I was thrilled by it placing first in the Marathon.
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June 5, 2021 at 5:21 AM
This went straight to my FAVE list.
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem.
Boreham Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Great poem L Milton Hankins, am happy I read 'Worshipping in Nature's Sanctuary', seems as though many people on edge these days and could benefit from pursuing, seeking and visiting a peaceful place as you've have well described. Thank You :)
Hankins Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thanks so much for your read, Paris-Maree, and your thoughtful, encouraging comment.
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Such a tranquil place you've painted with your words Milton, that wonderful feeling when you feel you have the whole world to yourself. Have a great weekend. Tom
Hankins Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thanks, Tom. Yes, and I can only hope that every reader has just such a place for quiet reflection.
Buehler Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Where else but in nature's beautiful sanctuary can such perfect bliss, tranquility and peace be found? Such pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Milton. :)
Hankins Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Thanks so much, Evelyn, for your kind and thoughtful comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.
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