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Worshipping In Nature's Sanctuary Premiere Contest Winner

Johnny-Jump-Ups nestle into the forest floor mosses, Along with dainty Jack-in-the-Pulpits hiding beneath The larger fronds of swampy ferns soaking up moisture From the dew-laden flowering branches of laurel Where I find myself dreaming in the verdant woodland, Edging the meadow beyond the cluttered beaver stand. A canopy of vine-entangled branches, a vault-like nave, Provides a sanctuary of sacred candles dimmed for mass A pew-less haven for wounded souls, and tiny chipmunks, Who scurry to find isolated spots for quiet meditation While grebes and gallinules make up the choir ensemble; A purple swamphen takes up the guttural baritone line. The late morning is mine, sitting along the narrow trail In a cross-legged yoga pose with arms across my knees, Soaking up the faint sweet smells of sassafras and pine And slipping into what I sometimes call my “blue funk” Where nothing on earth matters outside this quiet shelter, Dozing softly, I dream of a utopian sweet, elusive peace.
FIRST PLACE WINNER (TROPHY) June 25, 2022 Submitted to: "Poetry Marathon Mile 5" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney Written on June 3, 2021 Selected for FEATURED POEM On the front page of All Poetry, September 13, 2021 GOLD MEDAL WINNER "5 Golds or Less - Profanisaurus" Poetry Contest All Poetry, December 11, 2021 Appeared in "It's Still Poetry" Poetry Soup Anthology - 2021 CreateSpace, Amazon publication

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Date: 7/4/2022 5:08:00 AM
Wow! Getting ahead! Wish you all the best and Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/4/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris. I appreciate your best wishes!
Date: 7/4/2022 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Milt! I'm so very happy that you're on the track in the Marathon. Nature poems always make me smile! ;)
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Date: 7/4/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna. I also noted that you are in Second Place in the Marathon! Fantastic. I'm so proud of you. I'll keep running and maybe I'll catch up! (chuckling)
Date: 7/3/2022 11:21:00 AM
wow, this one has tons of good credits to it. WELL DONE on your trophy win, Milt. Amazing description of nature.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. This has long been one of my favorite poems. I am so grateful that it finally got a trophy win. I don't want to toot my own horn, but I've always thought it was deserving of one. I always appreciate hearing from you, Andrea.
Date: 7/3/2022 8:05:00 AM
Great win Milton…looks like this one is a proven winner - congrats and good luck in the remaining marathon contests.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mark. Yes, it does have a pretty good track record. I wish everything I wrote did!
Date: 7/2/2022 8:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Been struggling to find the right entires for this one,..
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2022 8:13:00 PM
It's a challenge, to be sure. This was my first placing. Good luck to you. You'll make some winning submissions, I am sure. Don't give up. See you at the finish line.
Date: 7/2/2022 6:12:00 PM
Oh so beautiful, Milt. Your amazing imagery brings me to the center of "this quiet shelter". Serene yet vibrant.. exquisite poetry, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much. I cannot tell you what your affirmative comments mean to me. I am grateful that this poem is resonating with so many people. And, of course, I was thrilled to find it now a Trophy winner, which further validates its meaning to readers. Warmest wishes to you, as well, Susan.
Date: 7/2/2022 2:18:00 PM
Wow. Congratulations. Such a lovely piece. I so enjoyed it. I love love love the woods. God bless you. Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2022 2:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gina. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Blessings to you, too.
Date: 7/2/2022 1:26:00 PM
This is a Fave for me too, Milton. Your "Nature's Sanctuary" sounds so idyllic, and your descriptive language is brilliant. All I need are the GPS coordinates and I'll be right there with you! Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently tied for 8th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2022 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, again, Mark. I am really enjoying the Marathon contest as I feel everyone else is. See you at the finish!
Date: 7/2/2022 12:03:00 PM
Milt, I remember this gem from the anthology and was so pleased to read it again and see it win a trophy today. I love the sanctuary imagery of your beautiful and tranquil haven. A fave for me. Congratulations and blessings ~ John
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2022 1:29:00 PM
Thanks, John, so much. I was thrilled by it placing first in the Marathon.
Date: 6/5/2021 5:21:00 AM
This went straight to my FAVE list.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/8/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 6/4/2021 7:58:00 AM
Great poem L Milton Hankins, am happy I read 'Worshipping in Nature's Sanctuary', seems as though many people on edge these days and could benefit from pursuing, seeking and visiting a peaceful place as you've have well described. Thank You :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much for your read, Paris-Maree, and your thoughtful, encouraging comment.
Date: 6/4/2021 7:51:00 AM
Such a tranquil place you've painted with your words Milton, that wonderful feeling when you feel you have the whole world to yourself. Have a great weekend. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Yes, and I can only hope that every reader has just such a place for quiet reflection.
Date: 6/3/2021 10:25:00 PM
Where else but in nature's beautiful sanctuary can such perfect bliss, tranquility and peace be found? Such pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Milton. :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2021 7:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Evelyn, for your kind and thoughtful comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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