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unspoken,unsaid swirl,whirl ripple,ruffle tease,torture delve,funnel foreboding burrows, in narrow tunnels; Fazed,crazed imagined fancies, unnerve,unsettle weigh down upset perturb; abound and tease with imagined dis-ease. Inspired by John's latest contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/20/2010 3:10:00 AM
Much to ponder here, Brian. These well chosen words stir much. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Elaine
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your well deserved win in John Heck's contest "Edge". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem in John's Edge contest with this marvelous write.. enjoy your sweet victory ..with luv..
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:06:00 AM
Well done again Brian... great write!!! Michael
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:15:00 PM
I think I had all of these emotions, yesterday, after work, you captured it.. this is a winner for sure.. love constance
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:22:00 AM
good luck in John's contest! Brian! well done! jimbo
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:55:00 AM
Cast your cares upon him for he careth for you...Whole lot easier said than done especially for me...I want to go back and pick them up...Keep the creative pen flowing.. I have written several in the last few days that I think are worth reading ...Tell me what you think...Are they too dull, dry? Sara
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