Worries

unspoken,unsaid
swirl,whirl
ripple,ruffle
tease,torture
delve,funnel
foreboding burrows,
in narrow tunnels;

Fazed,crazed
imagined fancies,
unnerve,unsettle
weigh down
upset perturb;
abound and tease 
with imagined dis-ease.

Inspired by John's latest contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 3:10 AM
Much to ponder here, Brian. These well chosen words stir much. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Elaine
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations Brian on your well deserved win in John Heck's contest "Edge". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem in John's Edge contest with this marvelous write.. enjoy your sweet victory ..with luv..
Falotico Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Well done again Brian... great write!!! Michael
La France Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 4:15 PM
I think I had all of these emotions, yesterday, after work, you captured it.. this is a winner for sure.. love constance
Goff Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:22 AM
good luck in John's contest! Brian! well done! jimbo
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Cast your cares upon him for he careth for you...Whole lot easier said than done especially for me...I want to go back and pick them up...Keep the creative pen flowing.. I have written several in the last few days that I think are worth reading ...Tell me what you think...Are they too dull, dry? Sara
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