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From streak and blur of candle faint Her whispered breath gasps through dim hall-- That longing haunts without restraint When a presence twirls come midnight: Gently, gently she advances Yet tapered wax fades…bleak the loft And she aches for snuffled chances; To meet him …in world’s afterlife. .......... 05/08/2019 Free Verse or Rhyme Contest of Eve Roper Pic #2

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Date: 6/6/2019 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, a hauntingly beautiful write.
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:15:00 PM
Hello Nette,she wants to meet him in the after life. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/27/2019 10:46:00 PM
G'day nette … wow, your verse is great. The praise I give has already been commented - Thank you nette - Lindsay
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Date: 5/13/2019 8:34:00 PM
Great write, Nette. Congrats on your win hugs // Charlie
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Date: 5/12/2019 5:52:00 PM
Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 5/12/2019 3:38:00 PM
A haughting poem brings chills Nette. Congratulations on your top placement. Happy Mother's Day if you are Mom! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/12/2019 1:47:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2019 12:12:00 AM
Great mood and atmosphere, Nette, very nice write.
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Date: 5/9/2019 8:49:00 PM
Do you conduct seances? If yes, sign me up... Wonderful, nette. So well-done. A FAVE. ~ gw
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Date: 5/9/2019 4:09:00 AM
Beautifully done; great pen.
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Date: 5/8/2019 5:51:00 PM
A beautiful interpretation of the the woman wit the lamp, nette!
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Date: 5/8/2019 4:05:00 PM
Well captured imagery of the photo in your precious words, Nette.
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Date: 5/8/2019 4:04:00 PM
Characters can be enchanting!
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Date: 5/8/2019 3:35:00 PM
Composing based upon an image always fascinates me. Yours especially so because of its depths, insights and smooth consistent flow...You captured so much and gave it to the readers! A fav.. a truly inspired gem...
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Date: 5/8/2019 3:25:00 PM
I like how you wrote this with the photo. Well done Nette! :)
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Date: 5/8/2019 2:40:00 PM
A mysteriousness verse Nette, I love to see poets interpretations of a picture, each one different . Good luck. Tom
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