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World Rule

Planet of unsettling decline losing our swagger of firm footing staggered by earth's vast pool of needy preservation. To seek global rule to fix plastic shard oceans pushed from a safety zone sustainable to bring nature's biodiversity to healthy to stop a virus that drains color from life to free the elderly from weighty tears to heal an urban drug lurch of self abasement to widen narrow alleys of thought to lift the knife edge danger of human dislocation to starve a diet of misdirected war to dislodge regimes of hefty monsters who rob their people's freedom. If I ruled our sphere we'd stop the "what if's" and just do like re-inhabiting our streets to purge litter, or to strive for self correction nourished by new discovery and love what we should be closer to. Poem composed: August 19/2020 (Revised January 2, 2021)

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Date: 6/16/2021 8:02:00 AM
I went to this poem because I think it's you most read - and I can see why - very thoughtful sir
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/16/2021 9:37:00 AM
Much appreciated, Anais. It is strangely the most read poem considering it was not a contest winner. Best wishes as you pen your fine verses. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 10/30/2020 7:49:00 AM
Wow Brian...this is really good, thanks for posting!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/31/2020 8:33:00 AM
Hi John I tend to avoid adjective layering + write poems that feature similes or metaphors. This approach is not especially popular but for me is a truer voice of intention. Nor do I write religious poems preferring to catch the spiritual glory of nature + life. Thank you for the suggestion however. Brian
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/30/2020 8:39:00 AM
I understand how you feel about receiving an N/A, it is a little dispiriting, but I'm glad you keep writing. One trick I've learned is to go back to previous contests of a certain sponsor and check the winners chosen, that way you can adjust your writing for each sponsor, it increases the likelihood of placing!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/30/2020 7:53:00 AM
Hi John Thank you. You are very kind. The poem, however, received an NA in poetry contests. So it has received little attention. Best wishes Brian

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