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World of War Vietnam

My long time friend Bill enlisted in 1962 Back then he said, "It's the right thing to do!" He served his country with vigor and pride Fought in the jungle and watched his friend die A machine gun severed three fourths of Bill's leg He cut off the remainder though never begged as the enemy stood over him, machetes in hand Bill's company blew Vietcong all over that land. He was then sent home, wheelchair bound but Bill O Hara you just couldn't keep down He opened a law office, put his "smarts" to the test And that damn machine gun stayed screwed to his desk His favorite passion was to set sail to sea Forgetting his problems for there he was free 40 years passed since he left Vietnam and no matter the day, he still hears that bomb! *** Contest: World of War : Vietnam Sponsor: Miranda Lambert Submitted by: Judy Konos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/24/2011 5:30:00 AM
Many congratulations Judy on your win in Miranda's fine contest, Happy Easter....:)
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:37:00 AM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Judy. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Judy
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM, Judy. Exceptional piece on the war in Vietnam. Happy Easter to you. Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Judy. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congrats Judy on your HM in Miranda's contest with this exceptional entry on the Vietnam War my friend.. moving and touching and enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:41:00 AM
I don't mean to be simple but this POEM ROCKED! (: one of the best I've read on the contest.
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Date: 4/17/2011 6:31:00 AM
Hi Judy, Another insight into what those poor fellows went through. A very touching poem. Cheers, N:)
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Date: 4/15/2011 12:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this afternoon Judy. Have a great weekend and I hope you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:35:00 PM
Judy, I'm glad Bill made it home from Vietnam and was able to build a career as a lawyer. Being at sea can bring a great deal of serenity and it's something he can enjoy without the use of his legs. But if he's still hearing the bomb, he might have a form of post-traumatic stress disorder. This reads like a true event and I'm sure it'll do very well in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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