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World is Powerless

world raw in anguish titans warring and mortals dying powerless to change or choosing, knowing choices bring grave requiems
Date: September 29, 2016 Poetry Contest: Lament A Tanka Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Date: 10/2/2016 6:28:00 AM
This is a breathtaking piece. Congrats on your placement, Richard. ;)
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Richard Martins
Date: 10/2/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Moon Flower, this newbie souper is truly humbled
Date: 10/1/2016 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Richard :)
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Richard Martins
Date: 10/2/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Laura!! :)
Date: 10/1/2016 7:02:00 PM
wow, an amazing final line! Congrats in this fine contest.
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Richard Martins
Date: 10/2/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for the high praise Andrea!
Date: 10/1/2016 2:57:00 PM
Good work Richard....sums up our world pretty much. Congrats. BG
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Richard Martins
Date: 10/1/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thank you BG :) Your words serve to motivate one further.