World Is Powerless

world raw in anguish titans warring and mortals dying powerless to change or choosing, knowing choices bring grave requiems
Date: September 29, 2016 Poetry Contest: Lament A Tanka Sponsor: Rick Parise
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Flower Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 6:28 AM
This is a breathtaking piece. Congrats on your placement, Richard. ;)
Martins Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Moon Flower, this newbie souper is truly humbled
Leiser Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Congrats on your win, Richard :)
Martins Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you Laura!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 7:02 PM
wow, an amazing final line! Congrats in this fine contest.
Martins Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so much for the high praise Andrea!
Gorelick Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Good work Richard....sums up our world pretty much. Congrats. BG
Martins Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thank you BG :) Your words serve to motivate one further.
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