World Eye Opener

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My thoughts in what I read today

UN: 177 countries vote in support of the right of Palestinians to self-determination At least the world now knows The blood stained tyrants behind scenes they who act unjust against humanity blind to truth and creation They can no longer hide as its written on the wailing wall for those who seek truth They will find answers to justice Seven countries opposed four countries abstained Its about time I believe The killing has got to stop peace has the only voice that should be heard in all this Shame on Israeli minister him calling on the devils bidding beheading is separation of the heart and soul a satanic ritual of barbarism Sounds like the golden calf is being worshiped once again blind ugly fools godless such deeds I pray to God to be merciful unto such unjust sins because we all know Mosses law laid down by the Almighty Father Himself

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/28/2016 6:37:00 PM

Hi Liam, i can understand why you write your words. The sad fact is, by many they will go unheeded. The road to any peace in this world shall be bloody. This is a deep poem, shows your caring, Loving nature. There shall never be a peace in that part of the world and all these foolish hatreds are now spreading. Too many old hatreds festering for there to be peace. An excellent write though Liam. Your Friend always....Vladislav. A seven my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2016 5:02:00 AM

- Blood has become the world's tears - War is contempt for life - An important and powerful poem, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 12:06:00 PM

Liam, i like this poem, it's deep. Have a nice day. SKAT

White Sage

Date: 1/3/2016 6:37:00 PM

excellent, the words said it all...a superb poem you've done Liam

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/3/2016 3:50:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow!This is a most powerful poem,you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.All so very sad but written so very beautifully with truth and deep caring, understanding and compassion for human rights.And I agree with you in all that you say.What you wrote is a great eye opener.Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden pen. All this situation really saddens my heart and soul very much.Thank you so much for caring and writing this very excellent,beautiful great piece here,Liam.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're the best in everything Liam.I really hope and pray that you're okay.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very peaceful and lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^