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With a frisky fifteen knot wind blowing Our ship departed with two tugs towing. Right away I was feeling excited Looking at mom's face, she was delighted Dad booked this trip and I was invited. Cruising from port to port around the world Riding a schooner with her sails unfurled. Under a star studded ebony sky I felt free as a bird that's learned to fly. Seeing each port for the very first time Every nuance, left me feeling sublime.

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Date: 3/18/2018 9:58:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/24/2017 6:44:00 PM
Well done, my personal favorite so far.
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/22/2017 2:45:00 PM
Perfect flow in this Acrostic, great job and congratulations
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Brian, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/18/2017 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, excellent acrostic, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Roy, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/17/2017 10:10:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Emile - loved it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Gregory, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/17/2017 12:30:00 AM
Great poem Emile, congrats on a great win!
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Date: 10/17/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/16/2017 10:21:00 PM
This is REALLY good, Emile. Congrats! Janice
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Date: 10/17/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/16/2017 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Emile, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/16/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2017 1:40:00 PM
A great fun Acrostic Emile! I enjoyed it :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/28/2017 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I can always count on you for a smile my friend, Emile.

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