World-Saving Breath Premiere Contest Winner


Jesus Christ suffered, counted all as loss, 
His life, He offered on Calvary's Cross, 

Echoes of His pain reverberate round, 
The Lamb of God slain that we may be found, 

"Father, forgive them, for they do not know,"
He did not condemn, rather love did show, 

"Today, you'll be with me in paradise,"
The robber forthwith found peace to suffice, 

"Woman, here's your son." "Here is your mother", 
Earthly duties done, like Him, no other, 

"My God, My God, why hast Thou forsaken?"
His anguish-filled cry leaves us all shaken, 

"I'm thirsty," cried He to fulfil Scripture,
This desperate plea, a human picture, 

"It is finished," said Christ, salvation won, 
As He slowly bled, God's beloved Son, 

"Into Your hands I commit My spirit,"
His surrender cry was heard, (as it's writ) 

Crucified by men, the Creator showed
His eternal yen to save us, bestowed, 

Buried in new tomb hewn in solid stone, 
Silence filled the gloom, He lay there alone, 

But on the day third, winning over death, 
He rose and conferred His world-saving breath. 



21st April 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/6/2023 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on this very powerful creative expression of faith...
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Date: 5/5/2023 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Jo. An excellent depiction of faith!
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Date: 5/4/2023 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your life-affirming win! Well-deserved.
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Date: 5/4/2023 2:17:00 AM
- A deep feeling of faith ... in your beautiful verses, Jo :) - Congratulations on your top win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/3/2023 11:53:00 PM
Amen indeed! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this faith-edifying muse of yours that exalts the Lord. God bless you.
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:18:00 PM
I love this poem more as I read it a second time. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win, Joanna. Into my Fave.
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Date: 4/25/2023 3:59:00 AM
Yes, He died for all of us. A beautiful Easter poem, dear Joanna .
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Date: 4/24/2023 5:54:00 PM
He saved us all and gave us a chance to be truly forgiven and free, how beautifully you express His love to us dear Joanna :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 10:13:00 AM
A wonderful spiritual poem this is, Joanna
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Date: 4/24/2023 9:49:00 AM
WoW! Jo, You took extracts from the scriptures and wrote a well-written poem on our Lord’s last breath. I applaud you and several other followers of Christ, on the Soup that use this site as a platform to share the gospel. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 4/24/2023 1:06:00 AM
You combine extracts from the bible to give us a wonderful picture of a risen Lord.
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