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Working Up To the Hallelujah Chorus

Whenever I feel the dirge Moments, days that pass without hope My pleasure begins to emerge The moment I pick up the old fishing pole So much negativity is purged When the bait lady smiles at me This special day I think I’ll splurge Not one kind of bait, but three Paths to the river and ocean diverge A sense of glee follows me to the bridge As onto the river banks I emerge Below the emerald pine tree ridge Grinning now, gone is the scourge As I cast my line, a manatee passes by “Enjoy your swim, my friend,” I urge And into the water my line does fly The song in my heart finds its way to my lips As I watch the bait and hook submerge A redfish chomps, the pole swiftly dips At one with nature, I converge Reeling in the fish, placing hands on her fins The Hallelujah chorus begins! *Entry for Frank's "What Turns You On?" contest

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Date: 11/7/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 2:29:00 PM
Just joyous, I am fine now Carolyn thanks so much for your prayers! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/6/2011 12:55:00 PM
Yes indeed. Great job herre. Wonderful description of the peace and happiness this brings your spirit. God Bless, Congrats, JB
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Date: 11/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
From all the pictures you have posted, I do believe that you are not only an award winning poet, but an award winning angler!! A believeable and wonderful poem, just suited for you, Carolyn!!
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Date: 10/17/2010 2:40:00 PM
and I bet you let it go! Fine win! I used to fish as a young girl. It would be nice to do it again. Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Zippedy Do Dah!". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:00:00 PM
Dear Carolyn,I believe we share a love of fishing Do YOU fly fish? It is very relaxing I will see YOU in the Winners Circle Superb Rhyme I have heard the "Hallelujah Chorus" several times while Fishing LOVE YOU ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:17:00 PM
YOur love of fishing is so apparent in your poetry about it, Carolyn. How wonderful you have such a love for it. LUv, Andrea ps those contacts took me weeks to get used to , Carolyn. But when people are calling you four eyes, you will sometimes suffer anything to improve your situation. haha
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:33:00 AM
This poem will always reel in the fisher in us, it sure has me hooked reading it. Good luck in Dane Ann's contest >> James
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Date: 9/2/2010 1:56:00 PM
John, Manatees are vegetarians and only eat plants. They pose no threat to humans. Thanks for calling today. It was great hearing from you and catching up!
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Date: 9/2/2010 1:13:00 PM
another great one! the manatee don't bite?. did you have your crabing net? went to mommas yesterday and saw some new fishing places yesterday. your welcome to join me if you want Missouri style. mud cat channle cats bass and crappie. blue gill, buffulo and ect...
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:45:00 PM
So very cool, Carolyn! Thanks for sharing your love of fishing in the well written poem. Love, Caroline.
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Date: 9/1/2010 11:41:00 AM
enjoyed sounds like fun!!
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:50:00 AM
You rocked my world today Carolyn with this poem. Memories for me of when we lived in Naples, Florida for 10 years. We love fishing. My hubby caught some alligators also. I caught some sting rays and they really give you a fight. I think they are beautiful though. Oh those were the days. The best to you in the contest my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 8:04:00 AM
love it, thats adorable, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:04:00 AM
While reading this I felt like I was next to you while you are fishing Carolyn.. All the best for Dane Ann's Contest with this interesting write.. Hope you are having a super day.. love Wilma
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