Working Up To the Hallelujah Chorus

Whenever I feel the dirge
Moments, days that pass without hope
My pleasure begins to emerge
The moment I pick up the old fishing pole

So much negativity is purged
When the bait lady smiles at me
This special day I think I’ll splurge
Not one kind of bait, but three

Paths to the river and ocean diverge
A sense of glee follows me to the bridge
As onto the river banks I emerge
Below the emerald pine tree ridge

Grinning now, gone is the scourge 
As I cast my line, a manatee passes by
“Enjoy your swim, my friend,” I urge
And into the water my line does fly

The song in my heart finds its way to my lips
As I watch the bait and hook submerge
A redfish chomps, the pole swiftly dips
At one with nature, I converge 

Reeling in the fish, placing hands on her fins
The Hallelujah chorus begins!


*Entry for Frank's "What Turns You On?" contest
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Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Just joyous, I am fine now Carolyn thanks so much for your prayers! Congrad's Light & Love
Ball Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Yes indeed. Great job herre. Wonderful description of the peace and happiness this brings your spirit. God Bless, Congrats, JB
Richards Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM
From all the pictures you have posted, I do believe that you are not only an award winning poet, but an award winning angler!! A believeable and wonderful poem, just suited for you, Carolyn!!
Guzzi Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 2:40 PM
and I bet you let it go! Fine win! I used to fish as a young girl. It would be nice to do it again. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Zippedy Do Dah!". Love, Carol
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September 10, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Dear Carolyn,I believe we share a love of fishing Do YOU fly fish? It is very relaxing I will see YOU in the Winners Circle Superb Rhyme I have heard the "Hallelujah Chorus" several times while Fishing LOVE YOU ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL
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September 9, 2010 at 5:17 PM
YOur love of fishing is so apparent in your poetry about it, Carolyn. How wonderful you have such a love for it. LUv, Andrea ps those contacts took me weeks to get used to , Carolyn. But when people are calling you four eyes, you will sometimes suffer anything to improve your situation. haha
Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 6:33 AM
This poem will always reel in the fisher in us, it sure has me hooked reading it. Good luck in Dane Ann's contest >> James
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September 2, 2010 at 1:56 PM
John, Manatees are vegetarians and only eat plants. They pose no threat to humans. Thanks for calling today. It was great hearing from you and catching up!
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September 2, 2010 at 1:13 PM
another great one! the manatee don't bite?. did you have your crabing net? went to mommas yesterday and saw some new fishing places yesterday. your welcome to join me if you want Missouri style. mud cat channle cats bass and crappie. blue gill, buffulo and ect...
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September 1, 2010 at 10:45 PM
So very cool, Carolyn! Thanks for sharing your love of fishing in the well written poem. Love, Caroline.
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September 1, 2010 at 11:41 AM
enjoyed sounds like fun!!
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:50 AM
You rocked my world today Carolyn with this poem. Memories for me of when we lived in Naples, Florida for 10 years. We love fishing. My hubby caught some alligators also. I caught some sting rays and they really give you a fight. I think they are beautiful though. Oh those were the days. The best to you in the contest my friend. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 8:04 AM
love it, thats adorable, good luck in the contest
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 7:04 AM
While reading this I felt like I was next to you while you are fishing Carolyn.. All the best for Dane Ann's Contest with this interesting write.. Hope you are having a super day.. love Wilma
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