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Working Man

working man early, six days before dawn while I, still curled warm in bed, listen he leaves whispers goodbye as he passes my door. every day as the noon whistle blows I carry his lunch pail we sit surrounded by scents wood, varnish, turps sunlight washing over us sandwiches, hot tea and stories. at night I wait perched on the stoop watch him stride down our street swinging his arms dusk crosses the avenue behind him a tram bell clangs gaslights flicker on in rows of windows. we are the engines he says we make the world move forward.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/2/2017 4:22:00 AM
Jobs vary but all work values. "we are the engines" of ourselves, family, factory, community and country, maybe which is that life means.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/2/2017 7:37:00 AM
I agree all people should be respected for doing a good job. But it is not like that now but then we are respecting each other in general less and less. Thank you for commenting. I love tour poetry.
Date: 10/1/2017 6:30:00 PM
Very well crafted. Enjoyed your piece.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/1/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thank you for your comment.

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