Get Your Premium Membership

Work Vs Pleasure

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Anais Vionet.


Why is pleasure measured in moments, while work is measured in weeks or years? Pleasures are like insubstantial fictions, sweet treats gone in the tasting or perhaps flowers, that once cut, wither. So don't be enthralled by fickle snippets of passion. Work and service have the weight of reward, by labor's honest toil, we fashion, forge and provide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/10/2023 3:32:00 PM
The opening says it all.
Login to Reply
Vionet Avatar
Anais Vionet
Date: 6/11/2023 5:47:00 AM
Yep, originally, this was going to be a couplet but I decided that was too easy and lazy.

Book: Shattered Sighs