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My whole life is a work in progress. This includes everything I do, have to keep working on and improving, fine tuning, use some spit and polish. Needs some more strokes of the paint brush to give it more color. Blue, green, red, a brighter shade of pale. Mix it all up splash it on the canvas, see if it's a closer hue to me. If I can't get it right it may not be here tomorrow. Slight of hand, puff of smoke, now you see it, now you don't. Ala-ka-zam, abra-kadabra work some magic. Smoke and mirrors make this all a fleeting illusion. Rabbit in the hat, card up the sleeve, hidden exit doors. You see my friends it's my affliction of addiction kicking in, there is no way to predict what will be in store for us today or tomorrow, may be joy or may be sorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2012 8:30:00 PM
Our old Jack writes beauties for all to read then suddenly disappears. Is he ok, does he know how much we miss him?
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:04:00 PM
Thank you lovely lady Elizabeth for your kind comments.....much appreciated.....old Jack
Date: 12/8/2011 4:24:00 PM
Hmm..i will come back to this write Jack..)
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Sir Joe for your viewing of this write and your comments.....much appreciated.....old Jack
Date: 8/27/2011 4:43:00 PM
interesting projection of life Jack and I think we are all a work in progress learning each day luv.. life is one big experience ... your words express to impress my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Linda Marie for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 8/25/2011 8:05:00 PM
Love it!! Discriptive of my present reality...:) Melissa
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Date: 8/26/2011 12:49:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Melissa for your kind comments, much appreciated...I really enjoyed your write very well done...with love....old Jack
Date: 8/22/2011 12:23:00 AM
This is a wonderful write Jack. so well expressed.....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:38:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Chiquita for you kind comments, much appreciated...with love....old Jack.......smiles and huggs back at you!.......I loved you new write so beautiful and deep....keep it up lady poet!
Date: 8/21/2011 10:28:00 PM
I like the way you view things jack! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, have yourself a wonderful night,..Linda
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:14:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Linda, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Date: 8/21/2011 8:40:00 PM
paul must be a mate. i agree with him compleatly if he did it in your accent. and thank you for comming by. i'm not use to saying mate. but i will be soon. john
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Sir John for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack.....Paul is a wonderful sharing loving caring mate as are you John!
Date: 8/21/2011 6:55:00 PM
SPOT ON OLD JACK,EXPRESSING YOURSELF BEAUTIFULLY .. BLESSINGS PAUL
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Date: 8/21/2011 7:32:00 PM
THANK YOU MATE, APPRECIATE YOUR KIND COMMENTS....WITH LOVE....OLD JACK
Date: 8/21/2011 3:52:00 PM
I hope that success is just around the corner..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2011 7:34:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Date: 8/21/2011 3:27:00 PM
a great piece you wrote here and all so true. we have to write everyday good or bad, just write, I agree with what you wrote. thank you for commenting on my poetry.
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Date: 8/21/2011 7:35:00 PM
Thank you sir James for your kind remarks mate, much appreciated....with love...old Jack.....always a pleasure to read you and comment mate
Date: 8/21/2011 1:48:00 PM
wishing you joy in all your tommorws! (and in the meantime, glad you're here on this planet with the resta us) namaste ~n
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Date: 8/21/2011 7:36:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nancy for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Date: 8/21/2011 1:19:00 PM
a magical wonder of life's predicament, jack.. we are all in the process of becoming.. terrific feel here.;) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/21/2011 1:24:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nette, much appreciated.....with love and huggs,...old Jack.....some of us like you are pretty nearly perfect ; ))

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