Work In Progress

My whole life is a work in progress. This includes everything 
I do, have to keep working on and improving, fine tuning,
use some spit and polish. Needs some more strokes of
the paint brush to give it more color. Blue, green, red, 
a brighter shade of pale. Mix it all up splash it on the canvas,
see if it's a closer hue to me. If I can't get it right it may not
be here tomorrow.

Slight of hand, puff of smoke, now you see it, now you 
don't.  Ala-ka-zam, abra-kadabra work some magic.
Smoke and mirrors make this all a fleeting illusion.
Rabbit in the hat, card up the sleeve, hidden
exit doors.

You see my friends it's my affliction of addiction kicking
in, there is no way to predict what will be in store
for us today or tomorrow, may be joy
or may be sorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Our old Jack writes beauties for all to read then suddenly disappears. Is he ok, does he know how much we miss him?
Ross Jr. Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Thank you lovely lady Elizabeth for your kind comments.....much appreciated.....old Jack
Maverick Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Hmm..i will come back to this write Jack..)
Ross Jr. Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Sir Joe for your viewing of this write and your comments.....much appreciated.....old Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 4:43 PM
interesting projection of life Jack and I think we are all a work in progress learning each day luv.. life is one big experience ... your words express to impress my friend..luv..
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Linda Marie for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Mesch Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Love it!! Discriptive of my present reality...:) Melissa
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:49 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Melissa for your kind comments, much appreciated...I really enjoyed your write very well done...with love....old Jack
Baity Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:23 AM
This is a wonderful write Jack. so well expressed.....smiles...chiquita
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:38 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Chiquita for you kind comments, much appreciated...with love....old Jack.......smiles and huggs back at you!.......I loved you new write so beautiful and deep....keep it up lady poet!
A   Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 10:28 PM
I like the way you view things jack! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, have yourself a wonderful night,..Linda
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:14 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Linda, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Loving Iii Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 8:40 PM
paul must be a mate. i agree with him compleatly if he did it in your accent. and thank you for comming by. i'm not use to saying mate. but i will be soon. john
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:18 AM
Thank you Sir John for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack.....Paul is a wonderful sharing loving caring mate as are you John!
Beadnall Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 6:55 PM
SPOT ON OLD JACK,EXPRESSING YOURSELF BEAUTIFULLY .. BLESSINGS PAUL
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 7:32 PM
THANK YOU MATE, APPRECIATE YOUR KIND COMMENTS....WITH LOVE....OLD JACK
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 3:52 PM
I hope that success is just around the corner..Sara
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Foulk Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 3:27 PM
a great piece you wrote here and all so true. we have to write everyday good or bad, just write, I agree with what you wrote. thank you for commenting on my poetry.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Thank you sir James for your kind remarks mate, much appreciated....with love...old Jack.....always a pleasure to read you and comment mate
Jones Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 1:48 PM
wishing you joy in all your tommorws! (and in the meantime, glad you're here on this planet with the resta us) namaste ~n
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nancy for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 1:19 PM
a magical wonder of life's predicament, jack.. we are all in the process of becoming.. terrific feel here.;) huggs, nette
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nette, much appreciated.....with love and huggs,...old Jack.....some of us like you are pretty nearly perfect ; ))
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