Words, Vows and Squawks

A faint hearted silhouette, 
Of a life once thought,
Surveyed the silent terrain 
Of a forest plot.
Searching for creeds
In the bones of deeds
Her net came up empty 
Only whispers were caught.
A canon of dreams,
Battles of air,
Toothless virtues, 
Knuckles gone bare.
Damning a fight, 
Stood a farmer trembling,
With fear he looked
At a rabbit’s cold stare.
A word adorned 
In glory diamond frill
Longed for a text 
To shine upon its bill.
Weaving in grammar, 
With vain notes of a stammer
A loin cloth, a rag, 
A fettered letter’s 
Poisoned pill.
An immodest figure
Of hair-chested speech
Watched over squawks 
Of birds on a beach.
Steaming in smothers 
Of mosquito-like brothers
A bellicose vein 
With nothing to leach
Bled profusely 
For compassion to teach.
A steely vow thunders 
At the grimace of night.
Speechless candle sermons 
Brightens the light.
Wondering if dead means 
Off with the head
A guillotine’s guilt 
Came down from its height.
A voice of timber 
Stood alone 
Upon earth’s stage,
A guard with silent strength
A worker of our age.
Holding a wounded dove 
With flower power 
Tears of love
A woman revealed
How truth is concealed. 
Daring to design,
At great risk of a  fine, 
She wove a garment
For our age: 
Eden’s dress in brutal rage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:15 AM
I am surprised you don't have comments, your writing is very good. I'm glad I dropped by.
Called Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I guess my stuff is a bit bizarre, perhaps off-key, too conceptual. Often what I submit here is far from finished and full of errors. My desktop is a mess however and I like to put my small efforts in a safe place:))
Cruz Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 3:53 AM
this is a great poem. well thought of written superbly. thanks for sharing this
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:17 AM
You could probably write it down word for word and call it your own like so many others you have stolen.
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