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Words Unspoken

He held my hand, not one word was spoken

Then a ring he offered as a token

     He could not ask for marriage

     For fear I might disparage

His eyes conveyed sentiments unspoken




* Entry for Adeleke's "Unspeakable Love" contest
 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful - I can see why it won : ) Jack
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful words!
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:16:00 PM
thanks, Carolyn. what you just said. Yes, I have noticed it too. People are not having time to do both: read AND write. It sucks, huh? I am still doing both and it is killing my back!
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:40:00 PM
Hey! Congratulations on your awesome Ist Place win in Adeleke's Contest, Carolyn! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:50:00 AM
~~Magnificent~~ congratulations on your win Carolyn in Adeleke's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 2:06:00 AM
This is beautiful, Carol. I wish I could write like you, keep it up. Congrats! Agba, Prince
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 2:49:00 PM
I LOVE IT! :)
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:41:00 PM
I knew this one would score high. Congratulations on a great win, Carolyn.
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:39:00 PM
Some really beautiful sentiments penned here. many hearty congrats for this victory.
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:21:00 PM
Good to see a top win with this worthy poem's first place honor, Carolyn. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:27:00 PM
Oh my LNC..youve done it again. Well done and congrats. BG
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Date: 2/26/2011 1:20:00 PM
Oh I thought this was beautiful Carolyn.Your words speak of deep love.You absolutly deserved 1st.place.~Lots of luv~Teresa
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win! I love it! Sami
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Adeleke, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win with this beautiful Limerick.(:missing your comments:)
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations dear Carolyn. You so do deserve this first place with this amazing entry of 'sentiments unspoken'!!
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:39:00 AM
I love the topic and you did an extraordinaly job...loved it.
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:58:00 AM
Wow Carolyn! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your first place win in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
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Date: 2/25/2011 12:55:00 AM
Lovely ~Carolyn~ as ever... Be so wonderful if Dane Ann and yourself get to come over, if we know in advance if necessary we could even meet you if not more than couple of hours away as I am having some problems travelling (fluid-legs). Both know you are more than welcome to base here few days... ;D So excited! Fingers legs and all crossed! lol.
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Date: 2/24/2011 3:20:00 PM
A very touching write dear Carolyn...the poet in you doth "ring"<-*smiles* ! Awesome poem dear ! Much love, james
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:58:00 AM
you have said more in this lovely write Carolyn, than many speeches would contain. i appreciate you works and always your kind words.
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:16:00 AM
Really an awesome limerick, Carolyn! Best of luck in Adeleke's contest!...Love, Gert
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Date: 2/22/2011 3:13:00 AM
wearing a ring is a word unspoken. john
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