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Words that squirm

Sometimes words are magnets stuck to your heart
in melody, prophesy, promise:
true or false. 

Sometimes words are puff-balls on weedy-stalks:
whispering things that blow away
on a breath.

Sometimes words make points that hurt:
bitter rusty knives that jab
and scar.

Words behave like viruses – mutate, transform, disguise.
Sometimes they mean the opposite of what they meant
before.

And sometimes 
these eels, these words that squirm with life
come leaping from your mouth
in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/23/2024 5:32:00 AM
"these eels, these words that squirm" WOW....I shall award this a true Bostonian "WICKED AWESOME"....nicely, and sharply, done Jeanette
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 2/24/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed the wandering on words. J :)
Date: 12/31/2023 6:03:00 AM
Interesting approach. I like the last one the best
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/5/2024 2:41:00 AM
The eels speaking love are ambiguous, in the way that words can mean different things than were intended (slippery), but occasionally come out right.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/1/2024 1:19:00 PM
Well, can't say I'm a fan. Can we change it to something more benign?
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/1/2024 2:33:00 AM
even the eels? Thanks.
Date: 12/31/2023 4:13:00 AM
Your have summed up words really well here Jeanette.. I like how you formatted the poem giving emphasis to how words affect in different ways..
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 12/31/2023 4:55:00 AM
Thank you. they are hard things to tame, but wonderful too.

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