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- Words Rumbles In My Stomach -

Unconsciously fatuous ;

                                           stylish
                                           foolish

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                                       It's all right ;

                                           doozy
                                           choosy

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                                          Nonsense ;

                                             fiddle
                                             giggle

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03.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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* 3rd place in the contest
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Callus Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Fun footless, Anne-Lise:) Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 3:17 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sunshine, excellent footle. Hugs Eve ~`*
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 2:48 AM
- Eve, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:01 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Anne-Lise (Sunshine Smile), congratulations on your strong showing (3rd place) with this piece!! Way to go! Hugs to you. :) Bartholomew
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 12:15 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Bartholomew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Fun lines. Congrats on your win, Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 12:15 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your win.
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 12:49 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:10 PM
I enjoyed seeing your triplet set!
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:15 PM
- Andrea, many thanks for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Cute one. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 11:56 AM
- Many thanks Phyllis, your comment means a lot :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Cute Anne Lise... really doozy.
Salehi Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 1:58 AM
You are very talented my dear...with just a few words, you wrote a book.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:25 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thank you for the giggle Anna-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:24 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Wonderful, wonderful. go for the humour Anne-Lise, love this.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:24 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Very well-done here. A "Footle" -- eh?? I shall have to try one of these and other formats like them. The humor speaks for itself with this one!! Most Enjoyable!! It's great to laugh -- for sure!! Best Always, Gary
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 12:47 PM
- Nonsense ... just for fun and smile, Gary :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Nicely done,,, Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:58 AM
- Eve, many thanks for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Light humour is always great, you did the footle very well.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:28 AM
- Just for fun :) - Many thanks for visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Excellently penned this Footle my dear lovely friend. A great fun indeed. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 7:25 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Swartz Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:26 PM
A nice fun read Anne-Lise. A nice way to unwind after my long day. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:11 AM
- James, many thanks for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 4:05 PM
I'm in the mood for a bit of nonsense today! Lots of fun, Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:10 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 3:55 PM
A fun read, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:01 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Funfootles Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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