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Wordplay Extravaganza

I saw a little boy and two pretty girls play on the beach
He took a few back steps and caught the ball 
But hit his butt on a pointed shell 
And let loose his good catch
He lost out to the girls and sat brooding
They joked to help him by lightening his spirits
All of a sudden there was lightning and the girls ran to their cabin
Dragging the sulky boy as didn't buoy their spirits at all.



*boy/buoy,  but/butt,  lightening/lightning

March 27, 2016
Contest: Wordplay Extravaganza
Sponsor : John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/30/2016 1:46:00 PM
Congrats Balveen to win. Love. Anisha D
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/31/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thanks, dear Anisha!
Date: 3/29/2016 1:01:00 PM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/29/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Luloo!
Date: 3/29/2016 3:15:00 AM
Brilliant take Balveen.. congrats on big win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/29/2016 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Upma! Always nice hearing from you!
Date: 3/28/2016 3:19:00 PM
Balveen, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/29/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 3/28/2016 2:01:00 PM
many congrats Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/29/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thanks & love, Jan!
Date: 3/27/2016 10:20:00 AM
Balveen it is a wordplay scramble, love it, and good luck in the contest ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/27/2016 4:46:00 PM
So glad you love it, Constance!
Date: 3/27/2016 3:11:00 AM
clever wordplay Balveen - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/27/2016 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Jan & love!

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