Balveen Cheema Poet Limerick

Wordplay Extravaganza

I saw a little boy and two pretty girls play on the beach
He took a few back steps and caught the ball 
But hit his butt on a pointed shell 
And let loose his good catch
He lost out to the girls and sat brooding
They joked to help him by lightening his spirits
All of a sudden there was lightning and the girls ran to their cabin
Dragging the sulky boy as didn't buoy their spirits at all.



*boy/buoy,  but/butt,  lightening/lightning

March 27, 2016
Contest: Wordplay Extravaganza
Sponsor : John Hamilton

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Anisha Dutta March 30, 2016 at 1:46 PM Congrats Balveen to win. Love. Anisha D Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 9:10 AM Thanks, dear Anisha!

Beautiful Scars March 29, 2016 at 1:01 PM Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Balveen Cheema March 29, 2016 at 1:27 PM Thanks Luloo!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 29, 2016 at 3:15 AM Brilliant take Balveen.. congrats on big win! Balveen Cheema March 29, 2016 at 4:57 AM Thanks Upma! Always nice hearing from you!

Sandra Haight March 28, 2016 at 3:19 PM Balveen, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema March 29, 2016 at 4:49 AM Thanks Sandra!

Jan Allison March 28, 2016 at 2:01 PM many congrats Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema March 29, 2016 at 4:49 AM Thanks & love, Jan!

Constance La France March 27, 2016 at 10:20 AM Balveen it is a wordplay scramble, love it, and good luck in the contest ~ Balveen Cheema March 27, 2016 at 4:46 PM So glad you love it, Constance!

Jan Allison March 27, 2016 at 3:11 AM clever wordplay Balveen - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema March 27, 2016 at 4:45 PM Thanks Jan & love!