Word Portrait

Dark chocolate eyes that smile with glee
 Laugh lines that only enhance his goatee 
          Blessed with pearly whites
          That gives good love bites
I'm drawn to his mustache like a queen bee

 Dark brown hair off sets creamy white skin
  Tall and slim, his physique makes me grin
            A sculpted nose so fine
             Sensual lips so divine
It's a good thing that handsome is not a sin

Long arms embrace me and hold me tight
   Perfect ears that are aligned just right
             Sexy arched eyebrows
              That get me aroused
Blush on his cheeks after an ardent night

   Looks and passion a small part of his traits
Smart and kind, he's been blessed by the fates
                 Witty, fun and sweet
                 He is without conceit   
The love we have, makes us great soul mates

21/ 04/ 2013
For Frank H's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/13/2014 8:07:00 AM
I'm drawn to his mustache like a queen bee...."The fun we have, makes us great play mates". Wonderful. Sounds great. Love Cecilia ..XXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/16/2013 8:32:00 PM
This is a cute and fun rhyme. The descriptions and imagery allow the reader to picture this person and see what they mean to you Nice job Thanks for the nice comment and congrats on my Country poem
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:58:00 PM
Wonderful limerick.
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Date: 6/23/2013 11:46:00 AM
Great use of the limerick form. I will be visiting you more as time permits. You are definitely one I will keep my eye on... Jake
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Date: 6/15/2013 5:43:00 PM
This is AWESOME. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 6/11/2013 4:28:00 PM
your poem is amazing................*Skat
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Date: 6/9/2013 10:22:00 AM
A nice portrait out of words everybody would like to read for himself!
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:30:00 AM
cecilia, it was nice seeing a comment from you. Hope to see a new poem soon!
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Date: 5/15/2013 7:27:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one again. Must be going well you havn't had time to write any poems.
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:23:00 PM
Hi Cecilia, stopping by to wish you a nice and lovely mothers day... xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/5/2013 9:37:00 AM
You must be talking about me except for the brown hair! LOL Big hugs Cecilia xoxox
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:00:00 PM
Enjoyed your very descriptive work...Reads like a winner to me..Great love of the man wrote this one...Sara
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Date: 5/2/2013 6:54:00 PM
Smiling here...congratulations
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:19:00 PM
Another nice winning poem Cecelia, a nice winning poem in the "WORD PORTRAIT" contest :-) *LINDA
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:23:00 PM
I love your word portrait. And am jealous that my soulmate is not here any more. Congratualtions. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:48:00 AM
Cecelia, such a wonderful portrait of a man, good physical details, enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/29/2013 5:44:00 PM
If you could find someone like this for real, I don't know if it would be good or bad. Thanks for visiting. You are very clever and have made me laugh.
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:38:00 AM
oh this is so good love it I can see him now and he a stunner lol xx
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:59:00 AM
this is beautiful poetry, Cecilia, love the whole lot to be incorporated in to a sonnet,,
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:17:00 AM
well, hey, you did a great job describing your soul mate. you made him sound fanTASTIC, my friend.
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:54:00 PM
There must be somthing in the air. Very passionate piece. Well done Cecilia.
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:07:00 AM
Cecilia ..... you are in love!!!!!!! - He sounds exactly the way you want him ..... he is perfect and beautiful in your eyes. - Beautiful poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/22/2013 9:42:00 PM
Sounds like you've found your prince charming...good for you....:-)
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