Word Morph - Well To Sick

last night I really didn't feel quite WELL
I tried to shake it off with all my WILL
with window open, hands upon the SILL
I deeply breathed fresh air that felt like SILK
which did the trick for I'm no longer SICK
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Degenhardt Avatar
February 6, 2009 at 6:50 AM
I doubt if I could manage this style as too much thought seems to go into it. Yet, you make it seem so easy. Very well written. Michael
Winter Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 5:32 AM
Ok, ok Nigel, there are so many of these, I will give it a try, but I fear I will be a big loser with this for sure! :( You did a great job here, of course, and glad you are feeling better! Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Fresh air will do that! lol well done. Now, will you do me a favour and let me know if either of my 2 word morphs are correct? Cause I can be kinda dense when it comes to puzzle-type things. :) thanks friend! Love, Kristin
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Otherwise, you could take two aspirin and call me in the morning! :) lol....Love, Carrie Fun morph!!!
Gorelick Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 3:46 PM
Nigel, this is so clever...I've got to try it. BG
Kelly Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 1:06 PM
No prescription required , Dr. Nigel .... Clever word changes ..... NHS not required ....
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