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Word Morph- Warm To Fine Pleas

WARM to me my love,do not cool
WARE am I,you made me your fool
FARE no further for I fear
FIRE extinguished by one tear-
FINE words might yet..ope your ear

lost lovemequintain (english)

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Steve Meadows

July 18, 2009 at 11:16 AM

very well put. cehck out some of my poems

Raul Moreno

January 25, 2009 at 3:10 PM

Congrats in your HM, your creative heart shines bright in your realm of short form...Raul

Monique Mcdowell

January 24, 2009 at 9:54 PM

Great word morph Brian and congratulations on you placing in the contest. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my word morph. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. ~Mon-i-Que

Constance La France

January 23, 2009 at 5:30 PM

Very nice poem... i really, really like it.. congrats on your win..Constance

Robin L. Gass

January 23, 2009 at 4:06 PM

This is a lovely poem, Brian. Congratulation on your win! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

January 23, 2009 at 1:19 PM

I remember this one, and thought at the time, it will be among the winning poems! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

January 23, 2009 at 12:34 PM

Congrats Brian on your win in Nigel's contest. An awesome morph! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

January 7, 2009 at 2:18 PM

Nice word morph. I tried one and it took me several hours...Raul

Michael Torres

January 5, 2009 at 5:08 PM

Nicely done Brian little emotional passion here. GBU Michael

Joyce Johnson

January 5, 2009 at 4:30 PM

Great Morph poem. Thanks for your remarks on my offering in your contest. I enjoy the challenge, thanks for sponsoring them. Love, Joyce

Sean Kelly

January 5, 2009 at 8:19 AM

A Morh , within a rhyming piece , well done Brian ....

Carrie Richards

January 5, 2009 at 8:09 AM

Excellent morphing, Brian! ...She is a fool if she doesn't respond to such tender words. :) Thank you very much for placing my poem, Winter Tears, in your contest!! And thank you for the challenge...looking forward to others in the future! ~ Blessings..love, Carrie