Nigel Fawcett Poet Free verse

Word Morph - Gift To Rose

I bring to you, my love, this GIFT
To ask forgiveness, for allowing this RIFT
The mistakes I’ve made, I know are RIFE
From on my knees, I humbly RISE
And tender my love, in the form of this ROSE

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March 8, 2009 at 6:08 PM Would work for me. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen

Robin L. Gass January 10, 2009 at 9:25 PM Who couldn't forgive you with such a heart felt gift of this rose of a poem? You have really challenged us all with this interesting and creative form you are so good at! Beautiful write, Nigel. Love, Robin

Raul Moreno January 10, 2009 at 8:11 PM Nigel, you have this morph style down pretty good. Great work and thanks for introducing us to it...Raul

Kristin Reynolds January 8, 2009 at 2:56 AM I agree with Christie - as long as you were not TOO bad of a boy, I'm certain the lady will take your rose.:) Love, Kristin