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word morph - RAIN to SNOW

I awoke this morning to the sound of heavy RAIN Downstairs a lake had formed, oh what a PAIN Off I went to fetch my mop and PAIL Nonetheless, my spirit does not FAIL I made a temporary gutter out of FOIL (This weather will not take me as a FOOL) Now I sit and dry my soaking FOOT That’s black because I trod in flakes of SOOT Which must have fallen from my stove’s air SLOT At last the rain it has begun to SLOW But, alas, it’s only been replaced by SNOW

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/8/2009 2:20:00 AM
Sounds like wuite the mess, either way! lol Darn mother nature and her morph's o' natural! lol loved it! Kristin
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Date: 1/7/2009 1:23:00 PM
Nice job, this is harder than it looks...Raul
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Date: 1/7/2009 12:16:00 PM
You are the morph man for sure. Think I might chicken out on this one after all. So many good ones! Very clever Nigel. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/7/2009 11:56:00 AM
Ya , You De Man , Mr. Morph ... Rain or snow , way to go .... Very clever word change in rhyme ; not easy , so , well done ....
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Date: 1/7/2009 7:10:00 AM
This one made me smile....so filled with clever frustration!! If it's not one thing...it's another!! Great job, Nigel!~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/7/2009 6:04:00 AM
Very clever my friend..I think you have this form down to a science..hope all is well my brother..Chris.
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Date: 1/7/2009 5:42:00 AM
Nice word morphing Nigel and thanks for you comments...Raul
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