James Inman Poet Rhyme

Wool

He thought she loved him as the dense clouds of wool filled his mind,
but she was there for only one thing, to fleece him of his money.
A dyed in the wool sex addict, an easy mark, she knew his kind,
but he knew her too, every penny was worth her soft fleecy skin, sweet as honey.
She gave herself to him as he let the wool cover his eyes, part of the game, he wasn't blind.


01/16/16

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Poet Destroyer A February 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM Thanks for the late reply

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis February 9, 2016 at 4:25 PM Nice little story of life. Congrats. James Inman February 9, 2016 at 8:36 PM Thanks Iris.

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 8:26 PM james, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA- James Inman February 9, 2016 at 8:38 PM Sorry for the delay, PD, thank you.

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 3:32 PM Good to see this on the winner list, Ralph. BIG congrats to you , my friend. James Inman January 24, 2016 at 3:49 PM Thanks Andrea

Paul Callus January 24, 2016 at 1:57 PM Truly enjoyed your take on this topic, James! Love the ending, too! Congratulations!! ~ paul James Inman January 24, 2016 at 2:02 PM Thank you Paul.

Steve Grammatico January 22, 2016 at 3:10 PM Nice work, James. The words flow. James Inman January 22, 2016 at 8:48 PM Thanks Steve.

Carly Lalion January 22, 2016 at 12:59 PM Congratulations; gorgeous write. james! James Inman January 22, 2016 at 2:44 PM Such a powerful word, gorgeous, thank you Carly.

Joseph May January 21, 2016 at 3:21 PM Congrats on your win James James Inman January 21, 2016 at 7:05 PM Thank you Joseph

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:17 PM James, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT ** James Inman January 21, 2016 at 3:04 PM Thank you S K A T

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 4:22 AM Congrats on ur winning write James! Great work! James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:45 AM Thanks so much, Dr. Upma.

Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 12:27 AM If only I could afford her, James. Nice write from an unusual point of view. Congrats! James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:45 AM I think the cost may be deeper than money, and I must admit I'm glad I can't. Thanks for the great comment.

C T January 20, 2016 at 11:22 PM thank you James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:43 AM Thank you CT for sponsoring the contest. You've had some awesome entries. I've enjoyed reading all of them.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2016 at 8:43 PM ahhh, you went crazy with wool and expressions of it. LOVE it. I was thinking of doing this kind of poem too until the other idea came to me. WELL DONE, my friend. And thanks for all the reads you gave me. Wish I had time to explore more of your poems. I have two days of comments trying to catch up on. I hope I saved a copy of when you told me other poems of yours I have not read. Please remind me of one again!! James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:40 AM Yours was much better then mine, Andrea. Thanks for the great comment.

Nette Onclaud January 20, 2016 at 11:06 AM there is a lot of this wool-kind going around... a sharp, descriptive write, james..huggs James Inman January 20, 2016 at 2:35 PM Thanks for the visit, Nette. Relationships can sometimes be very complicated and what may seem strange and unhealthy to us is normal to others.

Eric Boddie January 19, 2016 at 8:35 AM none of us is blind....when it comes to desires of the heart....many will pay every time....just for that physical satisfaction to start....and in the process, so many of us GOOD men are left behind....powerful piece james.... James Inman January 19, 2016 at 9:26 AM Thanks for visiting Eric with such truth in your comment.

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2016 at 9:06 PM James, this is a very clever entry for the contest. I love all the references to wool. A great job. I hope to see it high on the winner's list! #7 James Inman January 17, 2016 at 7:46 AM Thank you Connie.