Dan Cwiak Poet Alliteration

Woody

()     When       ()                       ()                   ()                                   ()
        ()                  ()                       ()           Woody          ()
    ()             wants             ()                    ()                            what
 Woody          ()              ()                 wants()()()              ()                ()                ()
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          WE          ()              ()                ()       WANT              ()          ()
   ()           ()            WARMER             ()             ()             ()    
                    ()               ()         ()                                WEATHER()()()        ()     ()
      ()                   ()              ()              ()            ()                     ()
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Woody      ()           ()           ()            ()             ()              ()               ()
   ()           wants       ()          ()         December's()      ()          ()          ()       ()                                     ()                   ()                     
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                       Winter          ()                      white()()()             ()              ()
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        ()           ()      WE  ()     ()  WISH   () HIM    () () WELL    ()             ()    
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D.W. Rodgers November 7, 2015 at 4:11 PM Warmly whimsical well wrought congrats on your win Dan Cwiak November 22, 2015 at 3:38 PM Thanks, Dave. I apologize for not responding sooner, but have been off the site for a while. l appreciate your comments.

CayCay Godwin November 6, 2015 at 4:40 PM How very clever - I missed this and apparently it was a (is a) winner. You Go! ... CayCay Dan Cwiak November 22, 2015 at 3:37 PM Thanks, CayCay. Haven't been able to come up with anything clever lately, so I haven't been responding to many of the comments I have been receiving.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 3, 2015 at 1:32 AM Sweet win Dan..congrats! Dan Cwiak November 22, 2015 at 3:34 PM Thank you, Upma. I am sorry I haven't responded earlier, but I have not been on the site for a little while.

Skat A November 2, 2015 at 9:50 PM Dan, Congratulations on your sweet December Win. SKAT Dan Cwiak November 2, 2015 at 10:25 PM I am still having some trouble getting used to this keyboard, so I also wanted to say that I do appreciate it very much when you stop and read my work and make comments. huggs... Dan Cwiak November 2, 2015 at 10:23 PM Thank you SKAT.

Beautiful Scars November 2, 2015 at 8:57 PM awesome!! :) -LU Dan Cwiak November 2, 2015 at 10:22 PM Thanks, Laura. I don't understand what is so awesome about a snow storm on paper, but I felt it was a way of making the alliteration more attractive and deeper than just the humor I was going for with it. I appreciate your read and comment.

Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2015 at 8:42 AM Is this for the creative layout contest? If so it should win hands down! Dan Cwiak October 30, 2015 at 6:07 PM My "Go Cubs" was put in for the creative layout contest, as they could not have been used for December...lol. Thanks for the visit and I appreciate your comments.

Robert Lindley October 28, 2015 at 10:43 PM Too much snow. Now get the snow shovel out and clean the sidewalks! Very creative and interesting way to present poetry! I myself do not favor cold weather at all. Dan Cwiak October 29, 2015 at 12:24 PM Brrrrrrrrrrr....Thanks, Robert. I hope the snow is the only thing that is getting deep around here. lol

Michael Tor October 27, 2015 at 1:18 PM What imagery Dan. lol Clever. Dan Cwiak October 28, 2015 at 2:24 PM Thanks, Michael. I was fooling around trying to make snow, when the contest caught my eye. Glad you enjoyed the imagery and thanks for the comment.

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2015 at 10:57 PM WHAT??? I love the cold feeling.... Wish Woody Well. :):);) LINDA Dan Cwiak October 27, 2015 at 11:03 AM Linda, I appreciate the cold and the change of seasons, but I'm too old and grumpy to still be shoveling snow. Brrrrrrr...even the thought gives me chills. I left you a note on your blog under my poem, and thank you for that as well. I'm not very computer savvy, so I still haven't figured out how the Soupmail works. That was the poem I was looking for...and if you are and "Outcast", I'm going someplace else. Thanks, again.