Woodland Romance

"A woodland path in the dappled sun hushed and quiet"

As creamy blue cloud rests on tall tender trees
Peeps of early morning sun still awakes  dossing greens
Dull dews are yet to vanish from their sheltering leaves
Silences of monastery still arrest woodland paradise
The songbirds are yet to reveal songs schedule of the day
The echoing breath of nature
Still nurture patient under slumber's custody
Only four naked legs print love on woodland moldered leaves
A perfect sanctuary for lucky cupid and Venus
As calming breezy strokes of nature
Lull perfectly braided hairs
Affection breathes rhythm to drumming tongues
Sweeping feelings conquer trembling flesh
As lips gently explore one another
Keen tender arms stroll awaiting avenues
As soft sweet moans arouse jealousy among woodland beings
'I love you' falls from ecstasy driven tongues
A perfect world is created by conjoined spirits
Where comfort nourish mind and soul
 It's now evening
 As weary sun leisurely walks home
A head still rests on sweeter-than-mattress subtle laps   


 Author: Joseph Osita
For Constance Rambling poet's contest: "Woodland Path"
11/06/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Benson Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Wow! I so enjoyed this one-Woodland Romance, I enjoyed your use of the literary techniques and your general creativity, your so much of a poet and now your a beacon in my mind! God bless you, Osita!
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Joseph on your win in this contest with this beautiful piece..gautami
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Many congrats on your wins, Joseph : )
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:52 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:46 AM
And congratulations to YOU on THIS beauty!!
La France Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:20 AM
congratulations Joseph, on your win in my conest with this passionate and beautiful poem~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congrats Joseph on your excellent win in this contest with this elegant entry so lovely..enjoy another grand win for creative poetry luv..
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 3:19 AM
Enjoyed reading this descrptive and passionate work..Reads like a winner in Constance contest..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review..Sara
A   Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Nice,, what a slumber custody.. very unique! you have perfect word Joseph.. I find every line intriguing, especially the echoes of natures breath. thanks for this one. good luck in the contest,..p..d
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Oh, a passionate one for that woodland scene, I think Constance will really like it, Joseph. I hope you will do well in the contest!
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