Wooden People

In the far away island on desolate seashore
You build your desire castle of dream sands
You protect the fragile niche
From the breaking waves rolling to reach you  
They can’t churn the sandy abode
Made by insular lonely people.

Your windows are closed to the sunny sky
Shrouded by the dense darkness
You turn into a slice of moonless night
In your periphery I pass you by
I can’t see through you
The true colors of opaque people.

You fly in the frozen sky
On the forlorn wings of winter
In your heart of Arctic sea
Sentiments freeze, don’t swim
I can’t hold your limp hands
For support for you’re cold people.

In your life that you make a desert
The oasis disappears under the dunes
Blazed by your flaming mind
Emotions burn, don’t flow
I can’t find a stream in your heart
To float my feelings for you’re dry people.

I’m wandering in the museum of our times 
Where you’ve all turned into wooden people.

June 5, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Furlong Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:25 AM
This is intriguing. I am swallowed into the complexity of the message in this poem. I love it as I have often thought similar thoughts, mostly about people who I consider 'other' than myself, like narcissists, or extreme people (in wealth or in religious belief), or just plain angry and violent people. Great stuff.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Oliver for your visits.Yes, people could be as dry as wood.No sentiment no compassion.
Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Love the imagery you've painted,,, Subimal...Congratulations on a very well deserved win... Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 12:14 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in "People" contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
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