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Wooden People

In the far away island on desolate seashore You build your desire castle of dream sands You protect the fragile niche From the breaking waves rolling to reach you They can’t churn the sandy abode Made by insular lonely people. Your windows are closed to the sunny sky Shrouded by the dense darkness You turn into a slice of moonless night In your periphery I pass you by I can’t see through you The true colors of opaque people. You fly in the frozen sky On the forlorn wings of winter In your heart of Arctic sea Sentiments freeze, don’t swim I can’t hold your limp hands For support for you’re cold people. In your life that you make a desert The oasis disappears under the dunes Blazed by your flaming mind Emotions burn, don’t flow I can’t find a stream in your heart To float my feelings for you’re dry people. I’m wandering in the museum of our times Where you’ve all turned into wooden people. June 5, 2018

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Date: 6/17/2018 4:25:00 AM
This is intriguing. I am swallowed into the complexity of the message in this poem. I love it as I have often thought similar thoughts, mostly about people who I consider 'other' than myself, like narcissists, or extreme people (in wealth or in religious belief), or just plain angry and violent people. Great stuff.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/17/2018 5:08:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver for your visits.Yes, people could be as dry as wood.No sentiment no compassion.
Date: 6/15/2018 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/17/2018 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 6/10/2018 5:07:00 PM
Love the imagery you've painted,,, Subimal...Congratulations on a very well deserved win... Hugs Eve
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/11/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 6/10/2018 12:14:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in "People" contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/11/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.

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