Paula Goldsmith Poet Dramatic Verse

Wonderstruck

When I was only four,                                                                                          we made a major move.                                                                                      My old home was warm and beautiful all year long,                                         now I was going to see the four seasons.                                                           My first winter was coming,                                                                                 each day was getting colder and colder.                                                            Christmas would be here very soon,                                                                I just could not wait for Santa.                                                                           On this morning I looked out the window and saw snow,                                    snow for the fist time and I was Wonderstruck.                                                 I ran outside,                                                                                                       I wanted to feel the snow and play in it.                                                               What a magical monument,                                                                                 now to build my first snowman. 



Date Written: 11/21/2021 

5 Place 

Wonderstruck Contest Judged: 11/28/2021  
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Greg Gaul November 30, 2021 at 11:59 AM What a touching memory of a first snow. Yes, the seasons send a wonderous message of nature. Congrats on your placement. Blessings to you. Paula Goldsmith November 30, 2021 at 12:29 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have this win. Glad you like this snow write. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day...................

Panagiota Romios November 30, 2021 at 4:14 AM I used to live in the Midwest. Each first snowfall was magic to me. I liked this so much. Faving it, Paula Panagiota xx Paula Goldsmith November 30, 2021 at 12:27 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my snow write. Yes, the snow was very magical to see for the first time. I will never forget it. I hope you are doing better. Have a blessed day...................

Ann Peck November 29, 2021 at 9:38 AM I'll bet snow was a wonderful surprise! So nice of you to share your memories! Paula Goldsmith November 30, 2021 at 12:25 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this snow write. Yes, it was a huge fun surprise. One I will never forget. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day...................

Joanna Daniel November 27, 2021 at 7:29 PM Seeing snow for the first time will sure leave anyone wonderstruck, Paula, great golden memories:) Paula Goldsmith November 29, 2021 at 8:23 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this snow child wonderstruck write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Have a blessed day...................

Delice Arleen Skelly November 25, 2021 at 2:17 AM Lovely memories of youth...Delice Paula Goldsmith November 25, 2021 at 7:41 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this wonderstruck write. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day...................

Arturo Michael November 23, 2021 at 10:34 AM Nothing can beat youth except for the memory it leaves...You've expressive the vibrancy of life here. Paula Goldsmith November 25, 2021 at 7:40 AM Thanks for your note. It was good to see you. Glad you like this wonderstruck/magical write. Have a blessed day...................

Anil Deo November 23, 2021 at 3:28 AM A striking wonder how our memory can resurrect the first times, that first snow, first snowperson, or first kiss of hot chocolate by the Christmas tree. shalom, shalom & thanks for memories & snow Paula Goldsmith November 23, 2021 at 8:33 AM Thanks for your note. That first snow and, first snowman was magical. Have a blessed day...................

Regina Mcintosh November 22, 2021 at 4:28 AM Snow can make the heart feel wonderstruck for sure. It can be mesmerizing. Beautiful write. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina Paula Goldsmith November 23, 2021 at 8:30 AM Thanks for your note. A wonderstruck magical time for sure. Have a blessed day...................

Jan Allison November 21, 2021 at 11:55 AM what magical memories of childhood Paula:-) hugs Jan xx Paula Goldsmith November 23, 2021 at 8:28 AM Thanks for your note. They were very magical memories. Have a blessed day...................

Eve Roper November 21, 2021 at 11:54 AM Snow is always a happy experience for those who have never been around it. Nicely written, Paula. Good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith November 23, 2021 at 8:27 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Yes, it is a happy/fun experience. Have a blessed day..............