Wonders Moon

Among unnumbered pompous twinkling stars
Trembles the pulsing heart awaiting dawn 
Of heavenly laden body at night
Clouds swirl, scurry round aimless wide and gone

Silken black heaven leaves breathless spilled light 
Clouds outside edge shine white against the moon 
It stills and smiles seductively before 
Pale blossoms that lay bare in passion swoon

1/15/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/24/2020 5:09:00 AM
Congratulation. A beauty ...
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Date: 1/18/2020 2:52:00 PM
Eve I love your poetry congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/17/2020 10:05:00 AM
Another beauty Eve my friend, creative and great imagination and just a wonderful serene read. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:41:00 AM
What a delightful offering, Eve! Imagery and personification stand out. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/17/2020 5:15:00 AM
Your adjectives are spot-on, and blowing me away this morning in this beautiful pem, Eve.
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Date: 1/17/2020 1:04:00 AM
Wowww breathtakingly beautiful and sensational, the title caught my attention too as a lunar lover. A very romantic poetic moonlit setting you painted in awesome imagery. Kudos.
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Date: 1/16/2020 1:16:00 PM
Hello Eve Roper, yes i agree this is romantic. Especially when a ful moon is in view. have anice day my friend.
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Date: 1/15/2020 11:34:00 PM
So lovely! (sigh) An amazing poem, Eve. :)
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Date: 1/15/2020 10:52:00 PM
Your beauty has no boundary in this beautiful poem of wander and peace, thank you for sharing, have a wonderful peaceful evening Eve. xo
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