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Layla, you look so wonderful tonight. Beautiful eyes like diamonds made from rain. After midnight lets dance in the moonlight. I'm your forever man, king of the swain. Beautiful eyes like diamonds made from rain. Before you accuse me, I had to look. I'm your forever man, king of the swain. You're no bad love, you're perfect in my book. Before you accuse me, I had to look, as I can't stand it when you turn away You're no bad love, you're perfect in my book, I will be there and not lead you astray. As I can't stand it when you turn away, please stop pretending and ask me to stay. I will be there and not lead you astray, our love, let it grow in every way. Please stop pretending and ask me to stay. No Alibis, this time it is for real. Our love, let it grow in every way, spiral like that old love we used to feel. No Alibis, this time it is for real, to believe in life our love must flourish. Spiral like that old love we used to feel, blessings fall like rain so we can nourish. To believe in life our love must flourish the core of my love is 24/7. Blessings fall like rain so we can nourish let it rain, so there's no tears in heaven. The core of my love is 24/7, one glimpse and I'm like superman inside. Let it rain, so there's no tears in heaven. Accept this golden ring to be my bride. One glimpse and I'm like superman inside. After midnight lets dance in the moonlight. Accept this golden ring to be my bride. Layla, you look so wonderful tonight. Written on 27 June 2016
Musical pantoum using song titles by Eric Clapton, listed below. Layla Wonderful Tonight Diamonds Made from Rain After Midnight Forever Man Before You Accuse Me Bad Love I Can't Stand It I Will Be There Pretending Let It Grow Old Love No Alibis Spiral Believe In Life Fall Like Rain The Core Let It Rain Tears In Heaven Superman Inside Golden Ring 10 syllables per line. Pantoum poem A rare form of poetry. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing. It does not have to rhyme nor have a syllable restriction

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Date: 7/12/2020 1:03:00 AM
Wonderfully woven...Wonderful!
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:57:00 AM
Sigh, lovely and well done. Memories of some wonderful concerts. interesting form and put together just right!!
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Date: 5/12/2018 11:57:00 PM
It is amazing how poetry and music blend so well together. I really like your choices to honor with your poetry I would think that you would run into copy write issues with using their videos and music. obviously, you know what you're doing I will have to look into it. Great stuff Jack2
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Date: 4/7/2018 4:09:00 PM
Another excellent offering, S-1! Eric Clapton is one of my fav singers/composers, and the accompanying song (Wonderful Tonight) brings back some very special memories. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/6/2018 9:17:00 AM
S1 looking at your different tributes I think you and my husband would have a lot in common. This is a wonderful Pantoum I could never have done one this long!
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:43:00 PM
I love the way you weaved all E.C's great songs into this stunning write so perfectly! :) Much craftier than I! :)
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Date: 4/5/2018 2:04:00 AM
In a word Awesome, I really like the way you have worked these titles, embroidered the theme so to speak, and because I'm an Eric Clapton fan this has to be a fave of mine....Maria :)
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Date: 4/4/2018 6:05:00 PM
So romantic! This must have taken a lot of effort to have everything flow so nicely!
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Date: 4/4/2018 5:45:00 PM
I love it... You are just amazing!
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Date: 4/4/2018 8:17:00 AM
- Awesome written with Eric Clapton's songs - Many memories flow forward, S.O. - I'm working on one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 4/4/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, I look forward to reading yours..
Date: 4/4/2018 8:09:00 AM
I would say that as well as poetry you have a great love of music. Tom.
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Silent One
Date: 4/4/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Tom, he is a great singer..
Date: 4/4/2018 8:06:00 AM
Wow...Awesome...How beautiful!I just loved it... Great form... Thanks for sharing....
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Silent One
Date: 4/4/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Supraja, I am glad you liked this one..

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