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Wonderful Ones

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What wonderful gifts I have, in the form of my close friends Ones who will never allow me to break when I start to bend Nothing I say or do is so terrible that it would tear us apart Dearest of all are the friendships that live deep in my heart Everlasting is the strong bond of the love we share together Real friends always support me and not just in fair weather Forgiving of my many flaws, true buddies will dry my tears Under devoted protection, confidants drive away my fears Life is full of laughter because of friends I've had for years ================= January 4th, 2016 Acrostic Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/13/2016 12:59:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Lin!!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Upma.

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:46:00 PM

Lin, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/12/2016 10:24:00 PM

Hear, hear, Lin, you can't beat a good friend or two. Lovely write, well done. Viv x

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, sir. Yours was wonderful!

Lu Loo

Date: 1/12/2016 10:08:00 AM

Congrats Lin in your placement!! *smiles* -luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Luloo.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 7:48:00 AM

Lin, this is truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Hansteven.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/12/2016 6:47:00 AM

Thank you Lin for this special acrostic, 37/40 congrats on your 3rd place win!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thank you, John, and also for hosting the contest.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, John, and also for hosting.

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/4/2016 9:11:00 AM

I recently lost a friend and sometimes such can affect one ever so deeply. We should cherish the ones we have all the more while they are with us. Your beautiful acrostic highlights in excellent form and inspiration that message. A7

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2016 9:49:00 AM

Sorry for the loss of your friend, Robert. Sometimes we take our friends for granted, but still, they remain loyal. THOSE are the ones who fit the label...'friend.' Thank you for such kind comments. ;)