Wonderful

Wake up
Out comes the sun
Nibbling the darkness
Don't you care to see
Every day  this single spectacle?
Run , right out of this gloom
Forgo it and rise again and again
Undergo this extreme feeling
Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 7, 2016 at 1:01 AM
LOVE IT
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February 16, 2016 at 2:30 PM
thanks a ton!
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 6:30 PM
lovely acrostic:-) hugs jan xx
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January 16, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Jan Allison. =)
Hamilton Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Very nice, you should try my spectacular contest you would do well. If you enter remember to rhyme also.
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January 14, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Thanks John Hamilton. I must render you this one. I read some of the entries to your contest and gave it a try. All right, so you have something new going on, great... Rhyming, ok.
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