Wonderful

Wake up Out comes the sun Nibbling the darkness Don't you care to see Every day this single spectacle? Run , right out of this gloom Forgo it and rise again and again Undergo this extreme feeling Love

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:01:00 AM

LOVE IT

viviane leite
Date: 2/16/2016 2:30:00 PM

thanks a ton!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 1/14/2016 6:30:00 PM

lovely acrostic:-) hugs jan xx

viviane leite
Date: 1/16/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thanks Jan Allison. =)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/13/2016 7:43:00 PM

Very nice, you should try my spectacular contest you would do well. If you enter remember to rhyme also.

viviane leite
Date: 1/14/2016 5:41:00 AM

Thanks John Hamilton. I must render you this one. I read some of the entries to your contest and gave it a try. All right, so you have something new going on, great... Rhyming, ok.