Komal Pattanayak Poet Free verse

Women Power

Don't you dare look at her
with those dreadful eyes
if you think she'll be frightened
in your dreams you'll hear your own cries

Dont underestimate her strength
her dexterity is more then you
about her corporeal and mental power
hey insensate man-you have no clue

if you think you are supercilious
you better change your thinking
in reality you're vicious
proudness is what with which you're teeming

Your woman is your life
at your every step she will be with you
its your duty to respect her
she'll be always by her husband's side-yes that's true

you harass her, you kill her
you burn her alive
she has to face the consequences
she is the one who always strives

But mind you she wont let a tear flow down
her actions will be dynamic
your truculent behavior wont stop her
from heading towards the tallest peak

If you ever break her heart into pieces
she wont remember you as the one who broke her heart
But rather the one who taught her
to live with a broken heartDon't you dare look at her
with those dreadful eyes
if you think she'll be frightened
in your dreams you'll hear your own cries

Dont underestimate her strength
her dexterity is more then you
about her corporeal and mental power
hey insensate man-you have no clue

if you think you are supercilious
you better change your thinking
in reality you're vicious
proudness is what with which you're teeming

Your woman is your life
at your every step she will be with you
its your duty to respect her
she'll be always by her husband's side-yes that's true

you harass her, you kill her
you burn her alive
she has to face the consequences
she is the one who always strives

But mind you she wont let a tear flow down
her actions will be dynamic
your truculent behavior wont stop her
from heading towards the tallest peak

If you ever break her heart into pieces
she wont remember you as the one who broke her heart
But rather the one who taught her
to live with a broken heart

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Beata Agustin September 13, 2024 at 2:29 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 4:15 PM komal pattanayak, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 27, 2015 at 3:50 PM KOMAL, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE

Debbie Guzzi November 12, 2014 at 7:14 PM I really like the concept for this verse. I consider myself a feminist but this has nothing to do with making the land & sea radioactive, fracking or marijuana so it is not a good entry for the contest please do submit something else? Light & Love