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Women In My Family

Women in my family Indeed, are rustic-looking and homely Wake up at four, of-course, with reluctance Untie the cattle though with inner resistance Wash each cow and buffalo so impeccably Remove the dung as though very faithfully Bake cow-dung-cakes (for fuel) artistically See to the household drudgery altruistically Six of them (as ours is a joint family) do not fail Fight among them, for no reason, and even assail Pick lice from each other's head, end-of-the-day Forgetting all false enmities as though act of a play Cooking, washing, child-rearing, tale-baring, Sleep, cuddled together, tiredness overpowering... 24 June 2022 Women in my family Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 8/10/2022 7:31:00 PM
Again a beautiful piece of poem Alex. As always I appreciate your words, these words are also satisfying and pleasing. Well did. Keep it always up three in the endless sky of your observation. Good luck.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/10/2022 11:23:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/22/2022 9:06:00 PM
Dear Friend, very proud of you! You have presented the true picture of women in a rustic background.
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Date: 7/22/2022 7:05:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, I am sorry I am late in congratulating you for writing this great poem. What a wonderful presentation of a rustic life - your poem is a gem. This is a fave for me. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/22/2022 8:42:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/14/2022 2:26:00 PM
a fav.
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Date: 7/13/2022 11:15:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem a lot my dear friend Christuraj! They're indeed great women enjoying both the ups and downs of family life. Congratulations on your win my dear friend and this awesome poem! Thanks for sharing. God bless! Hugs
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Date: 7/13/2022 5:09:00 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win. I truly enjoyed your poem. Blessings my friend
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/22/2022 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/12/2022 8:14:00 PM
Wonderfully written big congrats!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2022 12:21:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/12/2022 7:13:00 PM
I love your poem a lot. Only one with a rustic background will be able to get its sfull spirit ! Congratulations Chris on your win in the contest !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2022 12:21:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/12/2022 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the winning placement in my contest. Your poetry was written with talent, and it demonstrates your nice skills.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2022 12:20:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You for the opportunity given.
Date: 6/26/2022 1:57:00 AM
A realistic picture so typical of the women of the village. They have hard routine household chores to undertake. Though often fatigued, they don't have any serious complaints. There may be squabbles too, but by evening they forget all trivial bitterness and sleep cuddled together. Village life has its unmistakable charms. Beautifully penned, Chris....
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/26/2022 2:51:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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