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Women A point of view

Women A point of view They – flowers of diverse, exquisite, exotic, mysterious beauty – are beauties that are meant to feed the eyes of man, are beauties that are meant to stimulate the minds of man, are beauties that are meant to set fires in the hearts of man, are beauties that are meant to give wings to the spirit of man, are beauties that are meant to be the resting places for the souls of man. Women Another point of view They have become the thorns upon the stems of their rose self. They have become the thistles that protect their flower self. They have become the poisonous plants that kill pursuers. They have become the weeds that strangle, that over run their beauty. They have become the assassinators killing all that nourishes compassion They have become the destroyers of passion, of love, of life, of the spirit. They have become the controllers, men – responsible – has not evolved. They have become the conductor, as man is not fast enough to keep up or get past. B. J. “A” 2 December 29th 2006

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Date: 3/18/2015 3:04:00 AM
Wow...what a study in contradiction, sire. You got me there with the title...but the content is as much a definition of a poet's perception based on his experiences as the ones he feels about a certain subject. Wonder about all those things that brought about such polar opposites. How are you sire? Crazy schedule again in the isles...Still, hugs! Kim :)
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 3/18/2015 12:09:00 PM
Yes my Dear, that it is. I love women “ Women A point of view ”, “ as the ones he feels about a certain subject.” and it not only comes from “ a poet's perception based on his experiences ” but his personal relationships and from observations of others relations. “ Wonder about all those things that brought about such polar opposites ”. Well my Dear, the heart, the essence of my stuff, is one answer – rhymes about Linda, Linda, Denine, Linda, Moneca ( Monica, Monika ) and Xiao Ling – to your question, as for all the answers ?, Kim, I do not know if I have enough time left to write that epic novel, but if you are truly interested ??? “ How are you sire? ”. Just fine my Dear, just fine !, and I do hope the same for you. “ Still, hugs! Kim :) ” and back at you Kim . Bill . ( B. J. “A” 2 )
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 3/18/2015 12:09:00 PM
Good Morning Kim, : Thank you Kim, for alleviating my expressed concerns – as stated in my gmail of Tuesday, March 17th 2015 at 10:50 AM – and for your comments on my “ Women A point of view ”. “ Wow...what a study in contradiction, sire. ” and is this not a truth about women and is not “ Women Another point of view ” the heart and soul of far too many women ??? Can we not also say the same thing about a great number of men as well ??? “ but the content is as much a definition of a poet's perception based on his experiences as the ones he feels about a certain subject. ”