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Woman Wanting To Exhale

one day you will take me in your arms in such a fashion that I will instantly know I can exhale release let go of the great wall of defense that shelters me in the Jericho of my womanhood one day this victory over the darkness of mistrust the walking on ground made of slushy sand this victory over words not said and words whispered in the hush of silence this victory over love lasting for an eternity will be won and I will sigh…… 3/30/2021

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Date: 3/31/2021 2:05:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Janis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/2/2021 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Kim. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/30/2021 9:06:00 AM
Exquisite expressions with fine metaphor mixed in. Janis, this is good writing. I enjoy reading your work very much! Keep it up!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/2/2021 8:43:00 AM
Your comments are so encouraging. Thanks and much love to you friend.
Date: 3/30/2021 4:00:00 AM
Lovely, a breath of love over my soul,... God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/2/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Gina. Blessings and Peace. Janis

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