Woman Pouring Water

(after a drawing by Ghirlandaio)

We see that it was dashed off in a trice,
without a trace of reticence or nerve.
The contrapposto thigh, the shoulder’s curve,
are perfect. Nothing wasted.  All precise.
And yet it has the power to entice,
with just a hint of maidenly reserve;
vitality and vigour, volatile verve,
it offers us a glimpse of paradise!

There’s movement in the stillness.  Chimes unheard,
the breeze, unseen, that’s ruffling the flounces,
are ghosts in the machine: thus Vergil’s Word,
the gentle kiss of gesso, makes, announces
the life that’s in those folds and clefts and flourishes.
The Word’s made flesh - and what it strokes, it nourishes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 12, 2017 at 4:46 AM
I love the studies he made for this paintig/drawing... No I didn't know this before your poem, but I looked them all up prior to commenting :) Love the beauty of your enclosed rhyme sonnet. And it completely covers everything to be seen on the painting. Have you seen the original? That would be so awesome.
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April 12, 2017 at 5:16 AM
I wouldn't mind :)
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April 12, 2017 at 4:57 AM
No, I haven't (yet) seen the original. I did a sonnet sequence about his Sassetti Chapel frescoes in Florence - but don't worry, I'm not sending them to you!
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