Premiere Contest WinnerWoman in White

I saw her walking down the aisle, Her red hair untamed and wild, Like she managed to trap the last rays of the setting sun in her locks. Her sovereign face almost too small, To hold the infinite of her eyes. A childlike wonder dancing behind the veil of her lashes. Her mouth set in an indulgent smile, For she knows patience is a road seldom taken. Yet she chooses to take the route time and time again. My hand finds refuge in hers, Like a thirsty wanderer savouring the taste of the very last gulp, Before giving into his impending doom. She dons the white like an armour, A silent resilience in the face of fate itself. Unwaveringly loving to every wound her body has sustained. The onyx crown glistens in the flickering candlelights, Its sharp edges soft to touch for the few who dared coming close. Her black Excalibur has caressed more souls than it has pierced hearts. I tell her it's no wedding, That her body lay cold and her eyes forever closed, To the world that had so much to give and a lot more to take. Her eyes tell me story of a different time from a different world, Where she's a new bride birthing hopes and growing greys, Anxiously waiting to make love with life between the sheets of sorrow. And I know, I know, for as long as I walk this earth, She lives in me as much as I die with her.
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Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 2:26 AM
Who could not be moved by your sad, yet beautiful write. Congratulations Upasana on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Beryl! Hugs :)
La France Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Upasana, so beautifully sad and wonderfully penned, powerful ink, and congratulations on receiving a deserving POTW ~
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:27 AM
Thank you so much, Constance! On a different note, I love your name. Hugs :)
Nicole Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 6:39 PM
While she's in white, ' her body lay cold and her eyes forever closed. ' As I'm reading this, it does sound like she's at her own funeral. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Upasana, on Poem of the Week and on your trophy win. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:26 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Brandy! Hugs :)
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem’s achievement as potw!
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Thank you, Karen! Hugs :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTW with this marvelously crafted poem. Blessings. I am intrigued by your powerful images and wording.
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much, Sam! Hugs :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. WOW!!! What a powerful write/story you have here. I enjoyed reading. Have a blessed day/week with your win...............
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much, Paula! Hugs :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 7:02 AM
intriguing poem and beautifully crafted. congrats on your POTW designation
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Sara! Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:48 AM
It seems she is in her own funeral? Very powerful writing. Congrats on your trophy win
Banerjee Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Yes! Her own funeral and he decides to carry her memory as a newly wed bride. Thank you Andrea! Hugs :)
Pina Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Congrats on the win, I really enjoyed the read. Thank you for taking the time to write this. Hope all is well. - Seth
Banerjee Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 8:12 AM
Thank you for your kind words. All the love, Seth :)
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