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Woman In Chains

Woman in Chains Inner child blinks back tears through the cheval glass At a bruised reflection staring back, Battered by the hand of perfection, Wearing chains in glimmering pearls deception, Beauty and the beast - beauty now turned beast - Though in the grip of vogue, Restrained designs fettering creativity, Beneath the veneer of outlandish style, Wears hand-me-downs; Wounded dove, kissed with a rose from the mist Gasping on the runway of perfection Beneath the blazing sun of cutting tongues Behind made up faces, Disappears into a chalice -fiery crucible - Of coveted, borrowed, chains – A dark kaleidoscope of shifting shapes and sizes - Of stolen sublime – esteem devoured – ravished - In runway parades of opaque flawless delusion Skin hanging from a bony dress frame Of starving wings scarred by black veils of distortion With the salt of conformity heaped onto tender wounds Searing tender flesh reaching out In manacles for models of the meticulous Bound up in chains of unforgiven imperfection Forged in expectation’s subtle abusing links With parables of precise precision Handmaid designed by faultless perfection unseen the in the reflection Till, clothed in a sheath of a new creation, Slips out of leg shackles, greased by grace, The inner child in somersaults soars on wings re-stored. About 30 million people suffer from Anorexia Nervosa – both women and men. It can be a fatal disease effecting heart, kidney and liver functions. It is most prevalent in teenagers and young women. Anorexia took the life of singer Karen Carpenter, ballerina Heidi Guenther and model Isabella Caro. Princess Diana suffered from Anorexia. The recovery rate is very low – about 20%. This is definitely the story of Beauty and the Beast. 8-26-20 Contest: Woman in chains 30 lines

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Date: 9/3/2020 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I still see people with this Problem a bit hard to treat. I know a young female surgeon who suffered from this disease! Important issue raised. Well done!!
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Date: 9/2/2020 7:50:00 PM
Sam you have written this awesome verse with such eloquence, feeling and insight. That beauty begins with good health is a lesson all people should grow up believing. I have a short story posted on this site about a model with the disorder. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 9/2/2020 11:07:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 9/2/2020 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I so appreciate your words of congratulations and your message! hugs and prayers to you...
Date: 9/1/2020 4:06:00 PM
You have written of this disease with such compassion and poignancy, Sam. Powerful lines throughout; my eye was especially caught by the alliterative phrases "shifting Shapes And Sizes", "manacles for models of the meticulous", and "parables of precise precision". As always, you leave room for grace and hope in your conclusion. Beautifully crafted, my friend. Congrats on your top win! ~ John
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Date: 9/2/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hi John! Thank you for your congratulations! I was amazed at where this theme took me. The search for perfection in the external world leads so many down strange, and often fatal, paths. I so wanted the end of this poem to recognize God's beauty in all of us - to recognize the survivors of this disease. I guess I'm just addicted to hope! Blessings to you my friend.
Date: 9/1/2020 3:44:00 PM
love your interpretation of the theme Sam, i have worked with a child with this condition its truly heartbreaking ... she is grown up now and amazingly working as a chef!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2020 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your message and your congratulations Jan - much appreciated. How blessed this child was to work with you and your compassionate heart! Isn't it ironic that she now works with food! Thank you for sharing this survivor's story. I am blessed by your sharing! hugs...
Date: 9/1/2020 2:20:00 PM
Sad tale. Well written my friend! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/2/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Mark. It is a sad tale as anorexia distorts the inner beauty of each person until there is nothing left of God's wondrous creation. Blessings my friend. Thank you for your visit!
Date: 9/1/2020 12:36:00 PM
BIG congrats Sam on your TOP win--you certainly deserved it with this touching write.
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Date: 9/1/2020 8:17:00 AM
This is what I was hoping for, a true free verse that encapsulates the meaning of the theme, a wonderful write Sam, thanks for your lovely entry and congrats on another great win!
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Date: 9/1/2020 9:26:00 AM
John, thank you for sponsoring this theme! The entries that I have read have been powerful covering a variety of subjects. They were impressive. Knowing the selection you had to pick from, I am deeply honored to be on the podium. It was a great theme. So grateful for your placement and opportunity to write on anorexia, self esteem - the influence of the fashion industry. Blessings my friend!
Date: 8/31/2020 9:40:00 PM
The sensual poem will touch every heart. I was completely ignorant about 'Anorexia' Also i have special sympathy and regards for Princess Diana.
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Date: 9/1/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. I am so glad that this poem introduced the disease of anorexia to you. It is an insidious disease that warps self esteem. I also wanted to highlight the way the fashion industry puts chains on women - and some men. All the best. Sending you blessings!

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