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Woman In Chains

The sullen stars seemed guardian angels, looking at me from the half opened sky. Their stares were comfort of my crying, as though sending a message to fight, their wide wings flapped and took me up from my cell of chain. We flew in my dreams, drifted- as if the wind heard our laughter. Every lonely night, they were hanging on every moon's ray to cheer up my bout: For my freedom.

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Date: 9/15/2020 11:26:00 PM
Maris, I'm glad I got to read this poem. I like that the stars are guardian angels who help you get through the night. Good theme.
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Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 9/17/2020 3:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol. I'm so happy that you like it. Stay safe C.
Date: 9/14/2020 10:34:00 PM
Every lonely night, they were hanging on every moon's ray to cheer up my bout: For my freedom.... good write on woman; woman the power of the man; power of the universe, beauty of the earth; the main source of the creations but still she is chained everywhere by the name of nature or so-called godly books; now it's time to break this shrewd chains... MB of BD
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Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 9/14/2020 11:53:00 PM
A reality that is breakable MB. That's called women empowerment. No one is above our rights. The patriarchal society should be stopped. Women are not weak. It should be no gender-based world. Thank you for dropping by. Stay safe.
Date: 8/26/2020 5:20:00 AM
Deep and emotive poetry... I could feel the angst in your poem..
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Date: 8/26/2020 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent.

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