Woman In Chains

You sit in shadows to keep your bruises hidden
Woman,  please don't lower your head in sorrow
Bondage of the heart is the shackle you must break
No man has the right to keep you restrained in chains
So hear these words as the lyrics of a healing song
Allow them to soothe your lamenting cries at night

Cherished daughter of Eve, you deserve so much more
than the oppression you inherited by being born female
Woman, take courage and hold on to your dreams
Let no one keep you from reaching any goal you set
and don't forget to sing in a loud voice, proud and strong
as you welcome the blessings of life with each morning sun

You say you're alright, but there's no truth in that
The pain you feel comes from what lies deep within
Your heart aches because you think there's no way out
but dear woman, reclaim your virtue and set yourself free
He silences you with verbal threats and backhands
robbing you of all dignity. It's time for you to protest

Open that prison cell door, and grant yourself amnesty
Living means far more than finding a way to cope with life
In your hand you hold the key to unlock the chains 
and flee from the horrid wrongs you've long endured
Blossom as a wildflower, swaying in a Summer's breeze
because you found the courage and the means of liberation

Join the chorus of other women, once suppressed
who now sing aloud of the vow they made to escape
and of the tyranny that kept them enslaved and fettered
Oh woman! You deserve much more than you've been given 



August 24th, 2020
Woman in chains Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/2/2020 7:09:00 PM
Well penned... Congratulations
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 9/2/2020 11:09:00 AM
Jenna congratulations on your win with this excrllemt poem _ Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Date: 9/1/2020 4:15:00 PM
What I find most striking in this poem is your addressing the abused woman directly. You do so with truth, love, dignity, empowerment, encouragement, and compassion, with an underlying strength that can help break those chains that hold her down. I especially appreciated the line "Cherished daughter of Eve, you deserve so much more". I hope your message is able to reach those who could most benefit from it. Blessings and congrats, Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, John.
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John Watt
Date: 9/4/2020 5:14:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear that there is a history of such trauma in your life, Jenna. The empathy and compassion you exhibit by writing about it and sharing with other women under similar circumstances is heartwarming, courageous, and commendable.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 6:43:00 PM
Your detailed comments are valued by me, John. I wrote what I would say to any woman who finds herself in such a situation. First hand knowledge, though unfortunate, came from my heart.
Date: 9/1/2020 3:57:00 PM
I'm puzzled as i commented on this one before jenna:-( many congrats on your win with this powerful piece:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 6:41:00 PM
It's ok, Jan. Strange things continue on the site, but know that I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 9/1/2020 2:21:00 PM
Back again with congratulations on your win! Great job Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 3:40:00 PM
Thanks a whole bunch, Mark.
Date: 9/1/2020 8:18:00 AM
Another great write Jenna, congrats on another very deserved top win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 2:11:00 PM
I am so very delighted to have placed so well in your contest, John. Thank you...most sincerely.
Date: 8/25/2020 11:59:00 AM
Nice penning Jenna, great imagery and insightful expression too. Great work bringing this injustice to the fore. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:47:00 PM
I'm glad you found it to your liking, Gordon. Thank you.
Date: 8/25/2020 5:56:00 AM
Brilliantly written, Jenna, you have captured the essence of the song and taken it one step higher:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your supportive remarks, Jo.
Date: 8/25/2020 5:31:00 AM
Well written and so sad. There is way to much abuse going on in the world. It breaks my heart. Great Job on this one Jenna! A new fav
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for liking this enough to fav it, Mark. I appreciate your visits.
Date: 8/24/2020 11:36:00 PM
Impressive implore, Jenna. ' You hold the key to unlock the chains,' I like that in the context. The fact you spoke to the victims makes this poem very important.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for your insightful comments, Sigrid.
Date: 8/24/2020 12:21:00 PM
It is a mystery to me how anyone - or any god - could denigrate women as none of us would be here without them! Aloha! Rico
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/24/2020 12:29:00 PM
God would never denigrate a woman. It's in the imperfections of humans that guilt should be placed. Thank you for reading and leaving your comments, Rico.
Date: 8/24/2020 4:37:00 AM
There is always the opportunity for growth! Love your words. God bless you with a win :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/24/2020 12:26:00 PM
Hi Gina, and thank you for your comments. Appreciated.
Date: 8/24/2020 4:14:00 AM
Its sad that in some cultures that toxic environment still exists, we're all equal human beings regardless of religion, sex or colour. Powerful write Jenna and good luck. Tom. PS, do you ever sleep lol.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/24/2020 4:25:00 AM
Good morning, Tom. Sleep is not an 8 hour companion to me, but I survive on far less. It IS sad that so many are dehumanized with abuse. Thanks for being around so early in the am. It's nice knowing you're here.
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