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Woman In a Flashback

From light to dark, I am filled with delusion Of memories unknown, of emotional strain Like a hermit to words in moments dismembered When time became a riddle, a crazed labyrinth That each flashback becomes a nightmare Documenting nothing , not even a whimper. A quiet wail rattles of stories, from where? Her web of remembrance, disarranged, Embalming vignettes from thoughts fading fast When tremors besiege, yet I suppress the angst; Till I ask, ‘Woman of fog, scream my name,’ Before fiction becomes a chained reality. ``````````` 11/21/2015 Contest: Mirror Of Memories 'Alzheimer's' Sponsor: Tammy Reams

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Date: 11/28/2015 2:47:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Tammy's contest. <3 ForEver SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:12:00 AM
beautifully penned.. Congrats on the win Nette :) god bless
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Date: 11/26/2015 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette! This write has some very strong feelings the fog and the lamplight was fantastic! Thank you for entering into my contest and Happy Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/22/2015 6:35:00 AM
You nailed it. From what I've witnessed of this disease in my life, you captured my thoughts and feelings. It is a sorrow without end, beyond my grasp, that you have beautifully articulated .... CayCay
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:51:00 PM
You create a great sense of pained duality in this poem - a real feeling of loss. The language is potent creating broken, desperate sketches. 10/10!
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:37:00 AM
The sad and cruel end for some of us is in our future. It's strange how we can use the mirror to look back and to look ahead.
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Date: 11/21/2015 2:03:00 AM
A special, tearing poem, Nette. I lost my mother to Alzheimer's. Best to you.
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:41:00 PM
This outstanding poem has such heart impact that it is difficult not to stop and feel deeply about what you relayed-- the pain of emptiness, confusion.
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Date: 11/20/2015 4:15:00 PM
Nette, the broken feel of this is indeed one of fading--- losing the richness and color of a world that is slowly slipping away.This kind of poetry astounds yet tears me apart.
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