Woe Is Me 2009

''The bed's too big, the frying pan's too wide..''
Such words collide with meaning,
When you're left to hear them alone.
Woe is me since you've been gone.

Because you left so many signs,
unwritten notes and messages.
Reminders that burn me to tears,
I can't move the simplest of things.

Counting down the days like heart beats,
Until you return, how I yearn for you,
Everyday turned for you,
You know you make me live for you.

Please hurry back, 
My poor heart it bleeds for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/1/2009 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, everyone that commented-he is home on thurs for a visit so not so much woe is me this week! :-)
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Date: 11/15/2009 3:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem Naomi. I am sorry it is woe is you, today, maybe things will get better in a while. Sincerely,Love, Moses
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Date: 11/15/2009 10:05:00 AM
Nice poem. Good lines "Counting down the days like heart beats" Good Luck
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Date: 11/14/2009 2:54:00 PM
Age old tale of not knowing what you've got until it's gone! Nice write, Naomi! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/12/2009 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, means alot to hear such lovely comments! xx
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:45:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Naomi. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:17:00 PM
Nice poem Naomi...Enjoyed...Marty
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