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Wobbling To Mount Everest

Grumbling,rumbling and Wobbling my pen moves on the white paper,staggering as it strides onthe line Gush!it belches as horrible sound comes out from its tip,the lines are blur and twinkle stars appear.I am drunk No!not me its my pen,different thoughts flow into the mind beclouded by mundane things repelled by celestial beings Why!why am I here grumbling;I need to write to my glover or lover to join me in this journey to the peak of mount Everest where I`m at the top of my write,did I say write,Oh no!right yes!right now,Think of singing lovely vibes to your sweet g~~lover on the top of the tower with all your power for her to pick a drawer,Yes a drawer Stop interrupting pen...Am I confusing you no! not me it`s my drunken pen Not drunk just being funky eventhough I`m not pinky,My pen sip~sip more brandy so as to be more randy and not candyd.....avalanche of words pouring like tsunami hurricane and tornado Enough! enough I need to be free from this possessive pen spirit~of al~~co~~hol~~Blank~~blank~~blank...Black out~~back down...P~O~a~r~~inks spreading all over my paper Oh no!stench,stench of vomits~What a quagmire CONTEST:"Drink drunken pen drink!!!" sponsored by Elliott Bowe

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Date: 6/3/2012 7:21:00 PM
OLUSEGUN,, AWE,, THIS ONE IS EXCELELNT, CONGRATS ;-) WITH YOUR DRUNKEN ENTRY...XOX~PD
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Date: 6/1/2012 8:03:00 PM
A belated congrats to you and your drunken pen, Olusegun! You had me riveted until the vomit! Oh the stench! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:03:00 PM
love this dizzying spree, olu. congrats and huggs!
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Date: 5/31/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Drunken Pen" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2012 2:53:00 PM
nice narrative Olusegun...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/30/2012 1:11:00 PM
Olusegun congrats on your win,..David
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest with this amazing drunkenpen!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!
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Date: 5/8/2012 12:41:00 AM
Do you know that I commented on this the day you posted it and my comment isn't here? I tried posting 2 or 3 times last evening and it wouldn't work...so bizarre....the site is now drunken too! I tho't about this poem of yours for 2 days and how amazing it is...didn't even know that this is a new form...Now listen here, take that lil possessed pen to an AA meeting so he can get some professional assistance! hahah.....Gwendolen
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Date: 5/6/2012 2:15:00 PM
Olusegun, glad u liked my Seuss entry so much...It was fun but the ending was wimpy! lol...This is a creative wonder!...The idea of your pen being intoxicated and displaying such irritating playfulness is so fun! Yes, what a quagmire! Haven't heard that old time word in a long long time...fun write. Thanks for sharing it...Perhaps your pen needs a lil support group if this drinking doesn't subside...HiCcup! haha. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/5/2012 7:43:00 AM
Olusegun, a great entree, well done and good luck..David
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