'wizard ---- the Awakening'

he draped his arms around her
his way of providing comfort
her knees gave way, she was slowly slipping
hands fumbled, 
they had to pause; both were on the edge
muffled sounds were heard
they could not deny 
the awakening, 
there was no time to dwell
on what would happen tomorrow 
all they had was today, 
all they had was tonight

Draped / slipping / pause / 
edge / muffled / deny /
awakening / dwell 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/27/2011 7:27:00 PM
enjoyed reading your poem, Wilma. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 12/23/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in Andrea's contest.Loved it first time around.
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:44:00 AM
Well written Wilma. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Andrea's "Word Wizard's" challenge Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 12:51:00 AM
I'm very happy to see your name on our winners' list, Wilma. Congratulations to you. I just love this one.
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Date: 12/18/2011 8:15:00 AM
I love the way you think , write and you know already look... Yes Im a flirt... but hey thats me, comes with the package...love Michael
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Date: 12/17/2011 7:48:00 PM
That works.............lol : )
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:29:00 PM
Goooood Wilma,I love it - thank you for sharing it !OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/16/2011 9:39:00 PM
Wizard? Why does your title involve a wizard?! Does he have a wand? and muffled? hands fumbling? What is going on here?!? o_O hehe, well I should've known you'd write something steamy with these words, way to go Missy! ^_^ and ah based from Chris' comments below, I see you were the angel who helped him out-- I didn't even see that sneaky "d" word ;) what word was it? and good for him for returning the favor :) Wish you the best in the contest-- oh btw "fat chance"? waaaah.
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:08:00 AM
such a though provoking poem Wilma, awesome. harry
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful poem Wilma.Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 12/15/2011 2:43:00 PM
I had to pause from reading this....George
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:45:00 AM
Wilma very sexy, sensual and riveting, you went the opposite way to me, and used eight words you scamp, love it, have a great Christmas holiday and best of luck..David
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