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Without You I Am Lost

My friends at poetrysoup Keep pushing me on I stop to take a deep breath And Daniel Larson might say "What's next" I'll write about a bird, a sea gull Circling our Wyoming earth Vince Suzadail Jr. might comment "Come on you can do better than that" Alright the buffalo outside my door John Loving III might say "Him again " "We've heard of him before" I'll write about my rocks And Carol Brown might say "Come on give us something To knock our sox off" Bob Hinton said, "Best to you" But wait were those the words Or was it "At least try to do your best" Karen O'Leary said, "I Missed you Hope you had a wonderful holiday and_" Here I held my ears, I didn't want to disappoint her, and I wiped my tears. Mike Falatico, Jimbo Goff Christie Mills and Earl Brown too They all work so hard And I talk about the zoo I love you all, You are my family and friends Or I would never have tried to write This silly little poem And not worry about being sued But your encouragement Helps to move me on Without your honest words I'd not get any enjoyment from my works. Cile Beer I really do get encouragement from your comments. And I try to do my best to help keep our poetrysoup family strong. Thanks for all your help. God Bless, Cile

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Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Cile. Always a pleasure to read your writes. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:28:00 PM
A nice feelings for the poets who encourage you.
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:55:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight .. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:52:00 PM
it's good to know that i'm in the top three. jhl
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:48:00 PM
Great write that honors those of poetry soup. Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:46:00 PM
yeah baby! yeah baby!! YEAH BABY!!!
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