Without the Sea

The sun's beams penetrate me,
with fingers delving deeply beneath 
the blanket of my surface

And the clouds rise up, as bitter as the 
moon eclipsed sun, only to fall back 
to earth, with life on the coat-tails of
every drop

On these benign waters rest the swimmers,
whose hearts I hear play the perfect beat 
and whose skins I caress like a lovers breast, 
encasing them in champagne bubbles. 

Yet, they ravage me, savage me. Narcissists 
seeking the elusive liquors of promised bounty

And, though I envelop the rocks at the edge
of man's domain, I hold from him the abyssal depths;
sparing him from his frailties, and hiding from him 
my vanities

The rivers are my children, so easily breached 
by the lifeless, upturned fibrous husks of acorn 
shells,travelling along my viscous exterior. 
Their David to  my Goliath, making fools of 
all my tributaries. 

The seagulls flying above me, singing their 
homages, drain away my windswept salt from 
holes in their beaks. Like so much brine ejected 
from salt-encrusted lakes

Like a harbinger of bad news, the moons tides 
recede within me like elasticated yawns, 
revealing the lost souls of battles ancient;
illuminating elysium's reflected glory
upon the silvery face of that Lunar watch keeper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/15/2015 5:20:00 AM
'...the rivers are my children,' what a remarkable tribute to the beloved oceans of the world, since they cover a substantial portion of the earth's surface it is only fitting that they be accorded at least equal footing. Superb! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/15/2015 5:48:00 AM
Thank you my friend... I shall wait with bated breath! K.
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/15/2015 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Keith. By the by, I read Night scape parts one and two. I have yet to read them again, before forming a full and writable opinion. Regards Terry
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