Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Without Asking Why

Suddenly she felt idyllic amid tug of passion
Like answering the call of a blissful elation
As if her jubilant journey had just begun
Upon arrival of ebullient morning sun,

It wasn’t the dawning of distant horizon
Reflecting golden vistas splendidly lightened,
Not even the bashful blush of parting moon
Promising quite demurely to visit her soon,

It must have been his arrival that caused
Awkward turbulence of heart as she paused
When he stole her eyes with a captive smile
Arousing festive thoughts hidden for a while,

Having forgotten to adorn her prudent style
As he moved swiftly claiming life's worthwhile
She clumsily displayed with fervent desire
Welcoming visions that genuinely inspire,

Reveling burst of ardor she was aflame
When sound of his heart echoed her name,
And though she heard the cry of his tepid sigh
She embraced him intently without asking why.

March 14, 2018
Placed first in Late January 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George April 17, 2023 at 9:00 AM Words of sweet romance decorate the whole poem and this remains as a marvel of sensuous poetry.

Brandy Nicole January 28, 2019 at 10:54 PM "without asking why" The best feeling ever. Sometimes, no words are needed, as the heart just knows. This is beautiful and tender. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands January 26, 2019 at 6:29 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)

Vladislav Raven November 19, 2018 at 1:55 PM This is such a beautiful write Vijay. Hi my friend, another journey through your wonderful words. Again your words gently caress the heart and as I read I feel peace enter me. I always love the way your words of romance do flow, painting such wonderful visions. An excellent write my friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Liam Mcdaid March 25, 2018 at 8:03 AM sometimes the journey begins with a beautiful smile truly beautifully painted piece vijay Vijay Pandit April 7, 2018 at 6:15 PM Thank you liam.

Janice Canerdy March 21, 2018 at 8:51 AM Vijay, this is excellent! Vijay Pandit April 7, 2018 at 6:14 PM Thank you Janice.

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 20, 2018 at 10:01 PM Soul elevation this romantic reverie be, Vijay. This poem has golden butterfly wings. Beautiful expressions fluttering here and about the fringes of my mind, as your words dance w/exotic awakening love epiphanies. Spectacular prose. Love and smiles always. Vijay Pandit April 7, 2018 at 6:14 PM Thank you Freddie.

Jean Murray March 19, 2018 at 6:03 AM It's not often we hear desire from the female perspective Vijay. You have captured it perfectly here. Vijay Pandit March 19, 2018 at 6:44 AM Thank you for that observation and many thanks for your kind words.

Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:17 PM A beautiful and enticing write, Vijay. Some things are accepted automatically; the heart does all the talking! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 3:24 PM Many thanks Paul..always happy to read your feedback.

James Swartz March 18, 2018 at 10:44 AM Great stuff Vijay! Your romantic side is so very creative. This poem is perfect from beginning to end. Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 11:41 AM Thank you James..appreciate your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 8:13 AM - It's not always necessary to know why .... feelings :) - A wonderful poem ... as always from you, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 9:26 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise..appreciate your support, as always.

Nette Onclaud March 17, 2018 at 2:04 PM with such flowing wordplay and mood, i am in the front row applauding for you, vijay... good one; huggs Vijay Pandit March 17, 2018 at 2:21 PM Thank you nette, appreciate your kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2018 at 10:45 AM So beautiful, Vijay!! Almost seems metaphorical to me. Vijay Pandit March 17, 2018 at 2:20 PM Thank you Andrea...appreciate your support.

Joseph May March 17, 2018 at 10:41 AM The heart takes the lead without question...Very nicely penned Vijay Vijay Pandit March 17, 2018 at 2:20 PM Thank you Joseph..appreciate your support.

Eve Roper March 16, 2018 at 11:39 PM beautiful ... and so well said Vijay Pandit March 17, 2018 at 2:19 PM Thank you Eve.

Harry Horsman March 16, 2018 at 9:57 AM Beautiful poetry, Vijay. Vijay Pandit March 16, 2018 at 10:36 AM Thank you harry..appreciate your kind feedback.

Arturo Michael March 16, 2018 at 4:53 AM She knows why... such beautiful characters are displayed in your poem...and such sensitivity brings emotions to a heavenly bliss...All the best my friend Vijay Pandit March 16, 2018 at 5:55 AM Thank you Arturo..always enjoy reading your thoughts and kind feedback.

Probir Gupta March 15, 2018 at 10:35 PM A great poem ... Alliteration and assonance are charming ... Vijay Pandit March 16, 2018 at 5:54 AM Thank you Probir--appreciate your kind words.

Silent One March 15, 2018 at 7:58 AM So romantic Vijay, you really do romance so well through your words... A great poem that rhymes and flows so well... Vijay Pandit March 15, 2018 at 8:15 AM Thank you Silent One..always happy to read your comments and many thanks for your support.

Mike Gentile March 15, 2018 at 7:55 AM Your romantic poems are always thoughtful and moving, Vijay! My favorite line - When sound of his heart echoed her name! Well done Vijay Pandit March 15, 2018 at 8:14 AM Appreciate your kind words, as always. Many thanks Mike for your thoughtful feedback.

Maria Williams March 15, 2018 at 7:12 AM Love the last four lines Vijay. Amazing imagery and rhyme with fantastic poetic expression and a melancholic tone for your intriguing theme of 'without asking why'As always simply brilliant....Maria Vijay Pandit March 15, 2018 at 8:13 AM Always appreciate your visit and kind words..many thanks for delightful feedback.

Supraja Kannan March 15, 2018 at 4:17 AM So beautiful... Great flow and perfect rhymes... LOved it thoroughly... Enjoyed the read... Thanks for sharing... Vijay Pandit March 15, 2018 at 6:38 AM Thank you Supraja..happy to read your feedback.

Akkina Downing March 14, 2018 at 6:54 PM Simply beautiful! I truly enjoyed it and loved those last four lines :) Vijay Pandit March 15, 2018 at 6:38 AM Thank you Akkina..welcome back..appreciate your kind words.