Without a Lifeline

She unfriended them
No one really knows why
Wanting nothing more to do
With members of the family

It’s quite a mystery how
She cut off her roots
Clean in one fell swoop
Without a hint of hesitation

Looking back I missed out
Hundreds no… a thousand
Opportunities to help and heal
She could have been my project

She grew up with a bruised heart
Without arms to hold her tight
From her personal perspective
Dangling without a lifeline

And isn’t that the only view that counts
When a heart is hurting
And the healing process never starts



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Broken hearts sometimes never heal. Well written.
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:17 PM
When we're talking about kids sometimes they heal crooked...sad.
Kiser Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Very true for so many; sad. Nevertheless, you've painted an emotion invoking image.
Gauthier Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 8:29 PM
THank for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Callus Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 3:12 PM
How sad that somebody so young would feel the need to go to such extremes, Line; but I can't pass judgment not knowing what brought this along. ~ Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Poetic license... This poem is somewhat exaggerated in my case but it was inspired by families who have kids who leave home and don't look back because they're not interested in keeping in touch.
Faulkner Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Oh the young feel hurt so much more, guess they haven't yet developed the callous of living, this is so moving-
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Indeed the young are fragile, they need to be nurtured and protected. Thanks for your visit and comment, Michelle.
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